An original way to end Riddle. I have yet to read part 1 of this so I hope to find the backstory on Lily.

Lucius as written by you is much closer to my head canon than canon Lucius.

A think this chapter is the right length. More would be good, but then it is said to leave them wanting more. Now to explore more chapters.

Would love to see this expanded on, even if only one more chapter. His time at Tintagel could make an interesting follow-up. Just his first week getting used to using magic daily. thanks for a great short story.

This is a very merry story. Thank you.

Great story, thank you.

i mean, if i was harry, I'd probably keep a knife or two on me in addition to a wand. preferably cursed or poisoned. or both.

Last story, Harry just casually taking down all the big players of the magic world without even trying/knowing about it while being on vacation outside Britain after knowing about the magic world for less than a month :) love it. all the stories are great.

Loved all of this! One of the chapters got shared in a fb page and I'm sooooo glad it did!

LOVE IT!

I believe the issue is not whether Dumbledore would be that stupid but whether you would write him as being that stupid. Because that stunt struck me as peak Dumbledore. Swooping in with the Elder Wand to take care of irrelevant details then being struck speechless when his ultimate weapon is destroyed. I can definitely see him thinking the Elder Wand would have let him get away with that stunt too. The only implausible bit in that whole scene was him not knowing about the protections stopping him from doing that exact thing. Everything else? Rings 100% true to form. So I can see why no one said anything. After all, why quibble over one detail that you'd likely explain in the next chapter? You've got us this far, I wanna see where you're going to go next, not question your choices along the way. :)

Reading your stories is an amazing journey through imagination. And I would willingly follow you anywhere you wish to go when it comes to Harry Potter. Because you're brilliant.

Fun! Loved it!

This was so much fun! I love when just doing the logical thing stymies the busybodies.

Arrogant, talentless shit

BONNE FIC§