Reviews for Broken Chains
Erza Inu Hyuga chapter 25 . 10/22/2016
This better be good! I have shed too many tears for this to be a cop out ending! This better be perfect! The best, fluffier than the worlds fluffiest poodle! Or else I'll never forgive you!
Erza Inu Hyuga chapter 8 . 10/22/2016
I'm loving this! I love the story, how the characters are portrayed and just... EVERYTHING! Thank you author for existing and creating this!
Mizmaybe chapter 3 . 3/24/2016
This is boring I feel like You Made Hinata Too Easy to get with you should have made Hinata Play hard to get .sorry if it hurts you feeling
satomika chapter 26 . 10/11/2015


I just wish you described in detail whatever happened to Tenchi


I want to kill the guy with my own hands for killing the twins!
Hinatta chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
Another long Hinata story!
I'll add this story to my Hinata Community
PM me to be staff or if you know of any others!
Look for it here: ...

4thkage chapter 26 . 1/26/2015
happy ending...
4thkage chapter 11 . 1/26/2015 twins!
i mean...Hina-chan's twins...
4thkage chapter 4 . 1/26/2015
that's romantic...
4thkage chapter 1 . 1/26/2015
i luv twins...
tanithlipsky chapter 26 . 10/4/2014
interesting and nice.
Sasuhina fan chapter 26 . 9/24/2014
You forgot to punish Tenchi! But well, at least you finished the story. I liked how you made Hina realize her love for Sasuke more than the Raven. I hope to see your work in the future. I wish you get to have the time by then.
Sasuhina fan chapter 11 . 9/24/2014
I ******* hate you, Tenchi! I hope you and your descendants would get wiped out of the earth! Your whole existence will be forgotten! I hope you enjoy hell after Neji and Sasuke is done with you!
madlyinlovev chapter 26 . 7/21/2014
Ooooooit is so kawaiii i wish u cud write another story that tells is abt his children and his married life
srasanswa chapter 9 . 8/23/2013
poor hinata...wild tenchi
srasanswa chapter 7 . 8/23/2013
nice one
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