|Reviews for Naruto Dragon Champion|
| marquis.shax chapter 30 . 16h
lol I'm shocked you haven't had Danzo send out his ROOT agents to find the sword for him as I believe that in his mind if he could wield that sword then he could FINALLY "unite" all the lands with him as the ultimate ruler since that was most likely his plan as Hokage was to take on the other 4 great nations and assure Konohas dominance
| dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 17h
Great chapter and plot
| marquis.shax chapter 28 . 18h
lmao I know that it would make it way to easy but it would be funny if you had Tsunade (after being informed by Naruto that Holy Talon can't harm anyone that's not truly evil) issue an order to the council, or at least the trio of senile old bastards, to stand before Naruto for judgement. I'm 100% sure with the parameters set down for Holy Talon that Danzo would be split right in half since he does everything out of greed and envy pretty much the same as Sasuke as he got jealous that Naruto was catching up to him despite the fact that Naruto was pretty much completely self taught as until Sasuke awakened his Sharingan he didn't take being a sensei seriously. I swear if he could've gotten away with it I'm sure he'd have booted Naruto an Sakura off his team or never even taken them in the first place and focused entirely on Sasuke just like he did once that gay bastard awakened his sharingan
| marquis.shax chapter 26 . 7/28
uhm I think you mean Kin is out on a C rank mission since as far as I can recall no D rank mission has ever taken more than a few hours nor did it ever involve leaving the Village, unless when you said that instead of a few days you meant a few hours.
| Gambit197238 chapter 54 . 7/26
I like the way you are developing naruto and you are right if me over power it would be boring to read keep up the good work and post as soon as you can
| darkfox2357 chapter 12 . 7/26
I'm loving this story just started to read it and I can't get anof of it
| marquis.shax chapter 9 . 7/25
really minor mistake at the end of the chapter there weren't 78 teams (seriously can you imagine 234 people running around in the forest of death? lol) there was 26 teams which equals out to 78 people and out of those 26 teams you mean that 8 teams passed for a total of 24 people lol. As I said fairly minor mistake lol
| marquis.shax chapter 6 . 7/25
I really hate how authors portray Kubikiribocho when it's damaged. Seriously it's a well known fact that it will repair itself all it needs to do is come in contact with blood an yet you an others make it seem like Zabuza has to fix the blade himself
| KuramaFTW chapter 54 . 7/24
Holy fucking hell man, it is about time this chapter came out. And what and awesome chapter it was. Keep up the awesome work and update soon.
| Matsukaze Tenma chapter 54 . 7/24
thank you for the update; I hope to read the next chapters soon
| Hotstreak's crossover stories chapter 54 . 7/24
That was epic , Sasuke's arrogance and jealous always gets the better of him. He's lucky Naruto didn't break both of his legs. I'm glad Sasuke won't be the master of Death Fang, I would suggest Danzo be the master since he's an asshole but not that big of an asshole, someone like Kaguya should be the wielder.
Naruto ought to prepare for the worse when his secret relationship with the girl is realized.
Until your next update, goodbye for now
| DragonBolt21 chapter 54 . 7/24
I don't know how far you plan this out but I would love to see a female villian
| R-king 93 chapter 54 . 7/24
| JangCrome chapter 54 . 7/24
Thank you for the update and cant wait to see the nxt chapter
| ExodiaGeass8910 chapter 54 . 7/24
I'm glad that you were able to finally update this story. Only 'flaw' I saw was you introduced the Blood Fang Rangers as the Black Fang Rangers and then switched over to the Blood Fang Rangers. And it sounds like Temari is about to a mom! I wonder if there is any other of Narutos' ladies that are soon to drop that bomb shell on him soon?