Reviews for Naruto Dragon Champion
REVANOFSITHLORD chapter 1 . 9/30
may you rest in peace Salvador R, Balleza (Freedom Guard) i will keep and read you story .i found this story on year 5-7-2012 also year i first time find about fanfiction my greatest regret is i never review this story since i didn't have courage to review and i did't know what to says. i'm so sorry and good bye i hope can meet and talk with you on heaven when i pass away someday
Phantomwa1ker chapter 1 . 9/25
I have two things to say. 1: Freedom Guard if the afterlife is real and god lets you use the internet then know that you are a great writer. 2: To anyone who likes halo as much as I do then go check out Wolverfrog49 also on fanfiction. He has made two amazing stories for halo: True sanghelie, an elites tale and even better is halo insurrection.
REVANOFSITHLORD chapter 54 . 9/23
ah finaly you return .thanks for update
OrangeAvenger chapter 54 . 9/11
I remember reading this story just about when it was "published". Freedom Guard wrote good stuff and will be remembered for his great work on this site and any where else he posted his work. May he rest in peace.
Bibliophile1521 chapter 1 . 9/11
I think it's for real that the author has passed my fellow fans.I read about it from the author of Uzumaki Naruto: Dawn of the Gamer,Legend of the Kyuubi just a few minutes ago in the latest chapter of said story.I call upon all fans of fantasy, adventure the great story teller Freedom Guard and his stories to bow your heads in respect for this great loss in our genre and extend our condolences and well wishes to the family and friends of the author Freedom Guard.
Guest chapter 54 . 9/6
Are you really no more please let it be true you were so well in the account so please do come back.
Guest chapter 54 . 8/26
I'm very glad for the next chapther to come soon.
BlueShard20 chapter 54 . 8/27
Not to alarm anyone, but I read from one of "Mandalore the freedom" stories saying that the writer is no more. I really don't want to believe that!
darkfox2357 chapter 54 . 8/25
Great story i can't wait for the next chapter Ior series keep it up and I agree about the god like hero being boring
Story Artist chapter 54 . 8/21
Freedom Guard, I just want to say this story has been REALLY amazing to me. You were such an awesome writer that inspired many writers. I hope this story stays on to inspire many others and hope someone finishes where you left off. If you where a Christian, I hope to see you Heaven my friend. Hope your family does well.

Rest In Peace
welsh guy chapter 1 . 8/19
I'm not been disrespectful but how do we know Freedom Guard has passed away ?
Guest chapter 54 . 8/18
I hope that you do well in the future.
Rictor Yagami chapter 1 . 8/19
I have read this over and all I can say is it was awesome. But in all honesty I regret my last review of your newest chapter when I found out two weeks ago of your passing. T-T I couldn't stop crying and I wish you didn't leave us so soon. I loved you like a brother and you gave me good advice when I spoke to you. I really wish this was just a bad dream and I even wish it was me that had died instead of you. It isn't fair that you are gone and I honestly wish you were still here with all of us. There will be no one else like you but you live on in everyone's heart and spirit, along with the story's you left us. If I could give anything to have you back I would do it.

I have been listing to this great poem and I hope to one day make a new story in honor of you my friend and brother in writing. It is by Dylan Thomas. It is titled Do Not Go Gentle into that Good Night.

Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Though wise men at their end know dark is right,
Because their words had forked no lightning they
Do not go gentle into that good night.

Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright
Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight,
And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way,
Do not go gentle into that good night.

Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight
Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

And you, my father, there on the sad height,
Curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

R.I.P. Freedom Guard. I love you and will miss you, and I hope to see you again someday in heaven. Good Luck Freedom Guard.
Guest chapter 54 . 8/17
Dude I really like this story of yours
You really made the battle much more Dynamic and realistic. In the anime if you look closely you will see that Naruto was holding he could have beated him easily in the Nine Tails mode. Although you should have added some tracking skills and spells lile Piercing Sight
In any case from my POV you have done a great job in this story. Keep it up.
And please don't put any fillers. Sometimes they can be annoying u know. Well who am I to say this. It all depends on u. By the way could u send the URL (LINK) to the sequel once its ready.
Oh and u should try adding the training for RASEN SHURIKEN and SAGE Mode during Naruto's 3-Year trip with Jiraya.
Good Luck and put up next chapter as quick as u can.
I am dying to see what happens next!
The Death King chapter 1 . 8/16
I don't own this song, but I feel it about right with this
Amazing Grace, how sweet the sound,
That saved a wretch like me...
I once was lost but now am found,
Was blind, but now, I see.

T'was Grace that taught...
my heart to fear.
And Grace, my fears relieved.
How precious did that Grace appear...
the hour I first believed.

Through many dangers, toils and snares...
we have already come.
T'was Grace that brought us safe thus far...
and Grace will lead us home.

The Lord has promised good to me...
His word my hope secures.
He will my shield and portion be...
as long as life endures.

When we've been here ten thousand years...
bright shining as the sun.
We've no less days to sing God's praise...
then when we've first begun.

Amazing Grace, how sweet the sound,
That saved a wretch like me...
I once was lost but now am found,
Was blind, but now, I see.

R.I.P Freedom Guard and thank you for all the wonderful stories you wrote over the years.
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