Reviews for Harry Potter and the Narrative Causality
Laila2605 chapter 1 . 6/12
GoldenGryphon chapter 1 . 4/7
I love Shock Mercenary. I adore Schlock Mercenary. I have managed to collect one of all the current hardcopies of Schlock Mercenary (and as many of the extraneous fluff that we could afford) that Howard Taylor puts out. It has broken my heart that he is stopping the strip. I understand it, but still ...

Thank you. I always wondered how anyone could do a fanfic with Schlock that involved some sort of plot. (Personally I love the idea of hiring Tagon's Toughs to take out the corrupt parts of the US government, but it wouldn't leave much to hold things together, and might get expensive. Wishful thinking, I guess.
Best laugh I've had recently. Thank you again!
Rosa Mundi chapter 1 . 1/18
Can't believe I'd missed this one. :D
Cayar chapter 1 . 6/30/2016
Silly and fun. :)
adafrog chapter 1 . 5/15/2016
langeline chapter 1 . 7/20/2015
Your stories are great but in some of the fanfics like this one,... the pace of the ending seems rough and unfinished. Appreciate the 99% completeness though! Wish for 100% satisfyingness. Or is that too much to ask?
Deathmvp chapter 1 . 6/26/2015
that power in a Hormonal teen age boy would be very dangures to the farthers girls around the world lol.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2015
Mine life is complete ... A Potter/Scholck crossover ?
I can die happy now ... bury me in a tub of Genuine Inmatation Ovilquick please.
tricorvus chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
Oh my god!
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
this is utterly absurd, but quite funny as well
AvidReader chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
So we have 'Wishcraft' being simpler and more powerful than 'Witchcraft and Wizardry?'

Doubt that will go over too well with the folks planning the curriculum for Hogwars. Then again, they have courses for Divination (basically useless without talent) and Astronomy (without bothering to teach celestial mechanics or even basic math) and they require written homework in ALL classes in the form of 'inches' of prose (without ever teaching anyone creative writing, logic, etc.) Sure, we can add a course for 'Wishcraft.' :-)

Oh, yeah, before I forget, cute story! Please keep writing and posting.
MartinDC chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
Dayjor chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
Okay, that was hilarious. Wish there was more of it though.
Nytefyre chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
I love Schlock being part of the solution. The coincidences are great, and it's funny that he can just wish for stuff - kind of like he's his own (or Hermione's) genie. It would be interesting to see a take where it was more subtle - along the lines of Bink from Xanth...

Thanks for posting.
BruceTN chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
Excellent. Magic of Intent?
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