Reviews for Hinata's Wish
Sephiroth 200 chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
All you need is love hinata!
music4life1203 chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
... a dream. A DREAM! THIS WAS A DREAM! -_-
raphaella18 chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
MisaHyuga chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
This was a a beautiful story. I had felt her desire at the end. It was so sweet, brutal, but sad at the end. I love the story. :)
Towards the sun chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
What a hot sweet romantic lemon... Anyway, is it hinata's flashback or only her imagination? It's so real!
Blissfulltorment chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Wow... that was... brutal and sweet at the same time... Until the end when it was explained to be just a fantasy. But it makes me wonder, what was going through your head when you wrote the end? I mean... Hinata was masturbating to thoughts of her and Kyuubi-Naruto pretty much raping her?

Anyway, the sweet and lovey parts of the lemon were good, the rest not so much.
SethFC chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
RedFox20 chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
Wow, this was a really powerful story! Excellent work on the writing, even though the formatting is a bit weird, the whole fantasy itself is just... fantastically well written :P

Keep up the good work!
Dragonfly51 chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
I liked it a lot.

The whole story being italic kind of through me little a little.
Omna chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
I can't wait to read the next chapter come out.!
hinatakyuubilover chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
wow that is all i can say.
Topaznik-Citrine chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
noname00 chapter 1 . 1/23/2008
your fic was poetic in a way and i liked it
hyuuga's pale rose chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
Aw, damn! So...none of that really happened? I'm confused. It was so good, it can't be a day dream right?

P.S. More!1
A45 chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
nice, too bad for hinata though, but still a damn good story.
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