Reviews for We Are Broken
LalaLily16 chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
This story was really beautifully written. You captured Lily and James' thoughts about the war perfectly: James was probably a little more trusting and optimistic while Lily's realistic. The contrast between then is really nice :)

The saddest part of this story though is that we all know what happens in less than a year. They get to save Harry, but they can't be a whole family again, can they?

Ahh, you are seriously an amazing writer.
derbyshire chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
Wow, this is a beautiful piece! I adore this song by paramore, and i can't believe how perfectly you incorporated it into such a wonderful story. thank you x
blklover chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
great story write more update soon
nectoreen chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
that was awesome! i love paramore and i think you did a really good job putting the song in the story and whatnot. awesome.
kncrowder88 chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
This is good great job.
Dodger Gilmore chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
This was a good story. You did a good job at describing the life of Lily and James in the war. However, I would have liked it better if you had not made it a songfic. I've never really been a fan of those. But, that's just my opinion, and otherwise, this was a good fic!
thestralwhisperer chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
really beautiful story
GoddessofYouth chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
I like the song and, Lily and James' thoughts.
Silversaz chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
u r brilliant at describing. this was magical and luckwith any other storys.

saz