henry i just plain horrible! oh my goddess and i thought he was nice. i like peter hes such a sweetheart! but i still have a feeling that hes not human exactly...

oh my gosh henry is a psycho vamp! whats up wiht peter? is he human? or somehting more?

aw i like her sister! thats just soo cute! ohh who could be at the door... lol

yays! You fixed it! And you updated!

I'd give you a cookie, but I don't think I can send material objects through cyber-space too well, so...

have a cyber-cookie!

(;)

JFF

YOU FINALLY UPDATED! YAY! Okay, now that, that is out of the way, loved the chapter. I missed this story, and absolutley love your writing. Hate cliffhangers, even though I technically love them, though I do hate them at times... Well anywho, hope you can update soon! :)

-Aeieo

PS: Twilight movie came out today! I dont know if you are a fan or not, but I felt the need to tell you anyways! :D

I loved it! So...what happened to Peter and Henry? Did Henry die or...? UPDATE soon please!

fight the urge to, um, resdpond to the gorgeous most likely lieing vampyre Evie! It's going pretty fast isn't it...

you and this charactor remind me of myself, liking to wear black does not make you goth like I have pointed out to my large family many times. Black is a beautiful, it represents the sweet darkness of night we can no longer expirience because of light poluting. it also represents opposites, ying yang, a mirror image.

Extremely good.- The work reflects great detail and consistency. I must say I was drawn to Henry..but Peter is amazing. Most authors dull the writing down to 'please' the majority reader.. nope, YOU put all the violence in and, to my delight:D, a psychotic twist into Henry AND Peter.. Evie's attitude is wonderful; I like that she is so strong willed. ((I do hope for some conflict from Peter searching for her.. He must return!)) Again, Great work-I'll have to add it to my 'favorite's list'- I hope you continue AND update soon.

Why? Why must you be so cruel as to leave us poor, poor, innocent humans hanging like this? How? Wait... Do you have an alternative reason for doing this? ...Oh you do, don't you? How could you! Leaving us hanging like this. Fine! *huffs* I hear by solemnly swear to be your faithful supporter and reader till the end of my days on earth...is that what you wanted? Good! Now add some more! _

UPDATE ASAP!

That was very good and I look forward to a sequel hopefully.

YAY!

WoW! I never saw that coming I mean Peter is a vampire that explains how he took care of henry and with all the money too

I cant believe he propose to her and the drove a dagger in her plus turn her into a vampire as well

Oh my gosh I never and I mean never saw that coming I give 2 thumbs up for that little twist

I cant wait to read the next chapter!

Hey, I've been reading your story for a while now. I love your descriptions by the way! Its one of the things I love about your writing. I'm glad you've decided to redo the last couple of chapters, its easy to lose track of a plot sometimes, and kudos to you for taking it all on board. I bet your new work will amazing! Looking forward to it. :)

Hey I always love your story and I think the change will make it even better! Please update soon!

Here 4 ya,

-Aeieo