for the love of all that is vampires that is so good i read all of your chapters to day you have made some thing that you just want to bite and not let go of

Ah. I was wondering what was happening and why we were taken back. p Okay, well I'm glad. I didn't want Evie to be slutty.): I just hope this new plot will have a happy ending. _ Please update again soon I look forward to more of the new and revised.(:

Aw...this was getting good...

This is getting good...Is it me or is the testosterone level rising?

Ha...you've made me predict wrong!

Hehe...I like where this is going...

I love how you've made Evie a very versatile character. Any one in high school can pretty much relate to her.

Aww, how sweet is the scene with the sister? It's so darling..but sad! Hehe..the ending goes to my style!

hehe...what's going on in the Sanotorium?

I like this intro!

okay, I've read it over and over, and I have problems now!

first, Evie seems really selfish, at least to me. Most of the time she's thinking about who she's sleeping with, rather than worrying about the fact that Peter is NOT a good person.

Second, the story is really off track. In the summary, it sounds like Henry is the main problem. But when you read the story, it sounds like Peter is the main enemy, and Henry was just a tool. That, and it makes the reader come back toe Evie's sleeping around.

Thirdly, and finally, the title has nothing to do with the lost plot.

Mainly, I think you need to tie in Peter to the loose ends that are left hanging. Other than that, keep up the work.

Hugs,

MJ (JFF)

Poor Sophie always getting kidnapped maybe you should write a story from her point of veiw hm...

Yeah New England weather! Sorry lol. Love the story so far.

i liked it very much.

Aww that was a good chapter! It was short but I loved it! I hope you update soon, but this time of the year is always really busy so hopefully you will be able to!lol.

With love,

-Aeieo

Ps:I updated my story finally!