Oh, trifling! Contriversy is so difficult, especially when dealing with love. I like.

How random of Sophie lol. I can't believe Peter just let go of the fact that Evie just had an all day sex fest with Adam, how out of character for him. He has to have something up his sleeve.

LOLL that last paragraph was HILARIOUS

:) ahha..

so is this an evie/peter or evie/adam?

WOW! LOL! WHT SEX? hahaha! omg!

Whew. I'm just so happy Peter forgave her and that they're gonna be okay. Please upate soon, this convo with Sophie should get interesting. xD Poor Evie... And mann I heart Peter.

I'm glad that Peter was not mad about what she had done. Good luck to them explaning to Sophie about what sex is.

I understand how you feel...

Sometimes you just have to have a chapter you don't completely love to bring on the amazingness of the next one.

Long waits are necessary in life, so don't feel guilty about that either.

P.S. the chapter wasn't that bad, I think it's actually a good way to tie up some ends and open more possibilities...

Love much, keep writing, and MAY THE FORCE BE WITH YOU!

Gosh. After reading Eighteen compared to this, you've really improved. The ideas are still as wonderful as ever, but just the writing style and character development is what has gotten better.

I still love this. Isn't the rose so cliche? (I'm a sucker for it too)

-chokes when seeing amount of reviews-

166! Holy shit, girl!

Alas, I have joinned the review revolution, I must review everything I like. And this first chapter, I like very much. Short but captivating.

OOh the fire has started...lol. why did she cheat on peter though? im sad now. jk lol. great chapter luv ur writin! please update asap!

with luv,

-aeieo

WOw! She is very hormonal!LOL! Her love relationships are so confusing..FIrst she likes this guy then that one and o next is Adam..lol

oh wow! juicy chapter, loved it! Can't wait to see how this new twist with Adam turns out!

Okay isn't this like an extreamly super bad thing that she's having sex with Adam? What is Peter going to do when he finds out. Oh man this could turn out extreamly bad. Why si she even having sex with him I thought she loved Peter. This is not adding up in my head at all.

Ohh noo! That's not good at all. No no.. I mean, I love the descriptions and what not (that probably sounds really perverted xD) but I'm more into the faithfulness. / I don't like this brewing love triangle thingy... Nope nope. Still great writing though. I don't agree with the plot at the moment but we'll see where you take it soon I suppose. p

I knew it! I just hope she sticks with him! It's amazing.