|Reviews for Blast From The Past|
| Key2DestNE chapter 11 . 2/5/2012
Okay, first off, TAR AN' FEATHER 'IM! Second, good job 'til yo made me and everyone else wait TWO AND A HALF FREAKIN' YEARS! OMEGA OVERDRIVE ATTACK! But your stories are good, just update sooner and I will read again. Don't and all my author friends and I will find out where you live and... Well, you get the picture.
| Zohaku chapter 11 . 9/25/2011
*Uses Flamethrower on you* Feel my wrath!
*Then stops burning you* Now i feel better.
Finally a chapter after a very long time.
| SubZeroChimera chapter 11 . 8/12/2011
Raaaaaaarrgh-! Wait a minute! *stops flamethrower-ing you for a second* you're not dead! Yaaaaaaays! *bear hug*
| Kaist chapter 3 . 6/5/2011
Sooo.. are Starforce characters gonna appear in this?
| silver fire wolf chapter 10 . 5/3/2009
hi this is a very good story i was wondering will you please read my storys and review them
| Zohaku chapter 10 . 4/11/2009
Good work on this chapter. That nanites are probably the cause of his immortality. I also hope that you update your other story.
| SubZeroChimera chapter 10 . 2/26/2009
I did take an axe to this, didn't I? Heehee, it was quite fun, too. But as I forgot to say earlier, definitley a good explanation for what happened (to Lan). Keep up the god work!
| Fehize chapter 10 . 2/26/2009
Yeah! You updated!
Wow, Lan is sane again (if just for a little bit)!
Hmm, as I recall from a previous PM thingy, I can recall bug style, but I hardly saw it. That was why I was confused. -laughs-
So...I guess the next chapter is the last? :0
Hope it's epic! Update soon
| Fehize chapter 9 . 2/10/2009
Lan Immortal: COOL
Lan kicking some dude's head in the face: AWESOME
Lan using a LifeAura: Hell YES.
-laughs- All in all I am very confused, yet happy on the outcome of this story. Confused because I've never played Star Force of the ZX series, so the characters are people I don't know very well outside from looks and a name. I have played the battle network one, though, and seen some of the manga/anime. ((Also helps that Lan is my 3rd/4th fav MM character - beaten only by Harpuia, Zero, and Ciel. -laughs-))
The yellow stuff and Lan going psycho made me evil-grin. I'll admit it... I'm so evil. -sniffles-
I can't wait until more of this comes out! It;s already been a months plus I think, so I would be really happy if you hurry with the next chapter.
As for the fight scenes, I think they went along rather well. They are something people seem to have a problem with, but yours seems great. Enough short, quick sentences to feel that rush of a battle, but also enough detail to understand what exactly was going on.
Sequeal, eh? More Lan I pray -brick'd-
Please add the rest soon! -smiles- MOAR LAN! And more writing style. -smiles-
| Imagine.EXE chapter 9 . 1/30/2009
Well I'm a bit dissapointed that Dark Rocky isn't there but Oh well, I guess he is a bit overused. (if its not him its forte...)
And once again, the fight scenes were great! The funniest part was when model A and Ashe were like"what? What? WHAT?"
XD I laughed so hard that I think I woke up my mom. Oopss...
And for some strange reason, I keep thinking that Atlas is the same Atlas in Astro Boy X_X
Oh and Siarnaq was just perfect in the previous chapter, Every single one of his lines made me laugh.
And to answer your email, yes, unfortunately :(
| SubZeroChimera chapter 9 . 1/26/2009
Interesting... very interesting. I don't know squat about Megaman Star force, but I found this chapter drew me in. Only thing I can recommend is that you double-space between different characters saying something. I makes it easier to understand who is saying what.
| Zohaku chapter 9 . 12/22/2008
Good work. This is great work. It was a big surprise that Empress appeard. I find it a nice idea that Lan is immortal now. I am wondering if Chaud is really gone, because if good or bad guys suddenly disappear it means that most of the time that they are not dead. So i am wondering if Chaud is going to appear.
| MegaHog14 chapter 9 . 12/20/2008
Nope, nothing wrong here. A very good chapter, well done.
Keep up the good work, and it's nice to see you back!
| Imagine.EXE chapter 8 . 10/1/2008
YO! I haven't reviewed in a long while! Dang, I missed alot didn't I? How are doing?
lol ok, I have to admit, Siarnaq sounded hilarious to me for some strange reason.
I feel sorry for Lan though...
I would make a better review but I'm tired -O-
| Zemby chapter 7 . 7/21/2008
From your last line in where you were asking for reviews, you make me feel like I'm voting. xD
Anyway, this story's looking good so far. Make sure you keep the storyline moving along as quickly as you do with action scenes, or the balance might be in jeopardy.
Also, when dialouge from new speakers comes up in a paragraph, that's usually the right place to start a new paragraph. It keeps from the reader being confused, and having to backtrack to provide clarity to the situation.
And when you're describing how a new character looks, you tend to stuff it all in one long sentence. Even if the reader's just reading it in his/her head, it feels like his/her breath can run out from a run-on sentence like that. Just break up the description a bit, and you're good to go.
That's all for now. I look forward to more. :3
And once again, sorry for taking so long to review.
Ciao for now!