Reviews for The Glitch
evilblood chapter 4 . 11/21
Z chapter 4 . 4/15/2014
'snort' bet he's preggers with what will eventualy be the 4 guardians
Akainokami chapter 4 . 4/29/2012
Where did X get the data/parts to create that baby? Oh and what really happened(Origin of baby) in the first place? Layer's jealous~ XD
pupnutie chapter 4 . 7/13/2010
pretty good, and much thanks to your proofreader.

This is the only ZeroxX Mpreg fic I have seen so far, so I am hoping it comes together nicely.
Kingdom Hearts 3D rocks chapter 4 . 3/9/2009

this is hilarious.

i wonder what would happen if Axl got pregnant next?


probably be even more hilarious.
Sanger-sequence chapter 4 . 3/7/2009
I did not get any of the jokes, but this was still hilarious. Poor X has to deal with AXL. I'm extremely curious to see what his child looks like. *snickers* XD
zan-fraise chapter 2 . 9/19/2008

X is pregnant?


So cute~!

"So... you're pregnant. Then that means," Zero paused for a minute as if in deep thought, "I'm going to be a daddy!"

that surprise me


very good!

continue it pleasee!


Zan in Honeyland~
RandyPandy chapter 2 . 7/30/2008
I'm no yaoi or mpreg fan... but you got me laughing. XD
Firehedgehog chapter 3 . 7/30/2008
snort... snicker.. cackles evilly

this chapter was hilarious.. specially the axl ones
Firehedgehog chapter 2 . 3/6/2008
cackles evil.. mwa ha ha ha

go mpreg go
MungoJerry chapter 2 . 3/3/2008
Alia - total, abject shock, followed by business-like care behavior ("DON'T DRINK THAT!") with an undercurrent of shock... are they a couple in this fic?

Layer - weirded out, yet excited (secretly?) about there being a reploid baby

Signas - does not believe.

Axl - does not want to approach X for fear of catching teh pregnancy1!1

:3 Hoo hoo... I love this fic.
Shadow DelaSangre chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
I'm glad I decided to read fan-fics today. I'll not say too much for those who don't know about the Glitch. But I can't wait to read more.

Make sure you read your entries aloud first though. A couple of words were missing from the text. Nothing major, as you could guess what the intended word was, but still.
D chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
ha ha great please continue and update more! : D
Firehedgehog chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
*Stare* a glitch that makes X act like hes a hormonal pregnant woman.. lol
MungoJerry chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
... did you make X pregnant?