Reviews for Undeserving
Kaitylyna chapter 11 . 10/3/2010
OMGGGG! I loved your story! It was awsome! You have got to write a sequel! That was a very good twist when Nathan turns on her.
lauren0126 chapter 9 . 8/29/2010
great job!
Sky-Angel14 chapter 11 . 8/27/2010
COOL!
Goddess-Divine-05 chapter 11 . 11/2/2009
aw! *becomes a squeally fan girl*
ajendas chapter 6 . 7/28/2009
seriously...a black lamborghini? Everybody knows lamborghinis are SUPPOSED to be yellow..lol
Estel la Rodeuse chapter 11 . 3/21/2009
Nice story!
lithium17 chapter 10 . 6/14/2008
absolutely LOVED it
bloodstainedeverdark06 chapter 11 . 4/27/2008
I love your story! You turned Bella so perfectly I think only Stephenie Meyer could do it better! Awesome! Everdark
Mrs. Jasper Winchester chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
One thing, werwolfs can also hurt/kill vampires. Secoond, great story!
PocketofChange chapter 11 . 3/15/2008
YAYAY YOU! mmkay. i'm done. chuckle.
mrscullen01 chapter 11 . 3/13/2008
hey it's monkeytween94 from pleo! this story is AMAZING and you should TOTALLY keep going with it!
Vault711 chapter 10 . 3/8/2008
great chappie! it was the perfect way to end it! but im sorry ur stories over! sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob
Vault711 chapter 9 . 3/8/2008
uh oh spaggetios!
Vault711 chapter 8 . 3/8/2008
no edward dont kill him! hes on the good guy side!
Vault711 chapter 7 . 3/8/2008
didnt u say u read new moon? cause if u did then u would know that the wolves killed laurent! not a flame but i just wanted to tell u!
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