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3DY3Namite chapter 3 . 9/17/2011
Hey there :D

I'm likin' it so far-totally not what I expected, especially the higher ups coming from Uzu no Kuni, but hey, that's fine by me. Nice job xD

So this means please update! Please, please, PLEASE update! I'd love for this to continue on and finish!

And the structure of the story grammar wise is fantastic, so kudos to you for that!

starstruck87 chapter 3 . 5/9/2010
awesome, keep writing
Arashi-Kumo chapter 3 . 7/24/2009
This is a good story! Are you going to update again?
Tia'RaHu chapter 3 . 6/30/2008
Hey, this is pretty good, it's really drawing my interest in. I hope you get a chance to write some more chapters soon.
yo tadaiima chapter 3 . 6/26/2008
BABY KAKASHI! (squeals!)
sweetminni chapter 3 . 6/17/2008
good story! i hope you keep writing!
EnigmaticMemory chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
haha! so sakumo-san is a single dad! i like this!
toastxkun chapter 3 . 2/19/2008
that was funny i think!

So is Yoriko going to be Kakashi's adopted Kaa-chan?

Great job!
Gabwr chapter 3 . 2/18/2008
Great chapter. Kakashi seems to be cramping his style a little. Looking forward to more.
Prescripto13 chapter 3 . 2/18/2008
This chapter was a gem. Sakumo trying to play the role of eligible bachelor vs. single dad was amusing. Great work on your part! I look forward to what you have in store.
catgirl9696 chapter 3 . 2/18/2008
I wonder what could be wrong with poor baby Kashi : )
Orodruin chapter 3 . 2/18/2008
Poor Sakumo, little Kakashi is cramping his style. Good story, I like it.
Everybody's Neesan chapter 3 . 2/18/2008
Yet another great chapter. With your descriptive skills, it's nearly possible to see the characters you write. Again, well done!
B.l.k.tyger chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
Wah! This is so sweet! Sakumo is so funny, but he's such a sweet guy.
waiting4morning chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
Very intersting beginning! I like the descriptions so far and how Kakashi got his name - LOL. Will be looking out for future chapters. :-)
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