Reviews for Veiled Wings
potatopancakes chapter 1 . 4/16
listen. One of us will have to cave eventually. And it won't be me. So just update.
potatopancakes chapter 1 . 4/6
sorry I'm late! Update soon!
potatopancakes chapter 1 . 3/20
update please. Oh, and for the guy that said, and I quote:
"This is crap. Danny's suit is BLACK and WHITE! Also he would never circle above someone he's spying on without going invisible!"

Don't be a nitpicking troll! If you want to say that, be nice, like "Oh, just so you know, Danny's suit is black and white." DON'T HATE!
potatopancakes chapter 1 . 3/16
And now, a song...( From Frozen.)
The screen glows bright on my laptop tonight,
not a update to be seen.
A kingdom of awesome fanfics,
and it looks like, your's is queen.
I check everyday feeling really sad inside.
Want you to update, please at least just try.
When I came in, I wished to see
something amazing for everyone to see.
But you concealed,
wouldn't let us knooooowwwww.
I have to knooowww.
Update soon, update soon.
I can't hold it back anymore.
Update soon, update soon.
My comments you can't ignore.
I don't care
what the haters say.
Let the tale go ooooonnnn.
Trolls never bothered me anyway.
Thank you.
-potatopancakes
potatopancakes chapter 1 . 3/11
Hey? Guess what? You should update.
potatopancakes chapter 1 . 3/4
Update please. Seriously, update it. btw, if anyone wants to join in, feel free.
potatopancakes chapter 1 . 2/28
YOU FREAKIN' UPDATE ALREADY!
potatopancakes chapter 1 . 2/24
Listen, you! we both have better things to do than play cat and mouse (or flock and eraser). JUST UPDATE ALREADY!
potatopancakes chapter 1 . 2/24
Listen, you! we both have better things to do that this. JUST UPDATE ALREADY!
potatopancakes chapter 1 . 2/21
please continue this fanfic.
potatopancakes chapter 1 . 2/17
Please continue this fanfic.
potatopancakes chapter 1 . 2/15
Please continue this fanfic.
potatopancake chapter 1 . 2/14
Please continue this fanfic. Also, are you still alive?
potatopancakes chapter 1 . 2/12
please continue this fanfic
potatopancakes chapter 1 . 2/7
please restart this fanfic. It's so good I actually used it as a comparison (ex. This story is as good as veiled wings!)
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