Reviews for Hallelujah
yamiXyugi-setoXjou-4ever chapter 1 . 1/10/2012

this is amazing. i loved it. i love the reference to the song (its one of my favourites) but please tell me they're not too broken? and i liked the reference to your other story fireworks _ nice touch.
MistressOfRobins chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Absolutely adorable :) Sasuke has raven black hair though, not brown, so he's not a "brunet". But anyway, it was sweet _ I liked it very much :)

- R.M.L
Logic-is-overrated chapter 1 . 12/30/2009

ShikaKiba LOVE!
Duration chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
I like how you decided to denounche the usual cliches in this fanfic. Somedays, I kind of like something different. Thanks for sharing, because today is one of my needing something different kind of days. :)
Azamiko chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
Kaiji chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
I liked it a lot. it was different which is why I liked it I guess. I will wait for the new fanfic and the new chapter of Forget Me Not.
bite-me93 chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
Love this it's really cute!

Love the mention of ShikaKiba in there too, it seems no one knows of that pairing.

It was cute, and an original style I hadn't seen before.
SerenNoir chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
Quite a down-to-earth realistic fic.

Absolutely beautiful.

The "cold and broken hallelujah" part is the song Hallelujah and I've always known of the one Rufus Wainwrighte sings. It is in the first Shrek movie.
mist of 4 chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
more real to life... quite like the story.
XxXFading-With-TimeXxX chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
yay! that's so good! very cute, and...good? well, i can't think of a better word..wait! amaz-azing! there! great job
Crazy PurpleSage chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
That was truly excellent. A lot of SasuNaru is cute, but so cliche or "storybook", it's true. Why can't they have a happy ending that is realistic and not overly sweet. This was a really good story, nice job.
Ilkar chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
Hi hi! The last line is from a song called "Hallelujah" written by Leonard Cohen. but it's sung, most famously, by Jeff Buckley and its in Shrek (the first one- when fiona is in that Lord Farquaads palace! haha i'm such a loser)

Aside from that I loved this. It's true fanfics (including mine) are full of clichés. I must admit though I do love it when Sasuke is possessive and anti social, and when Naruto blushes in fics but thats only because I love that stereotypical side of them. Thats not to say that there shouldn't be other sides to their personalities. I think I agree with everything you said though, especially the bit about Sasuke meaning everything he says to Naruto. Forgive me but thats so sweet!

Ok I've got to stop now because in reality, they are only characters. MUST REMEMBER THEY ARE NOT REAL!

But I loved this, as you can tell by my ridiculously long review! Very original. Was good to see someone actually breaking away from the clichés and making a point of highlighting them, without ranting about how much they hated the whole thing. Well done! x