Reviews for Check Mate
MoonlitPuddle chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
LOL! Very funny. _ Just remember that you need a small letter for tags. Like here: “Fine. I’ll go!” He replied.

That needs to be a small aitch.

That aside, very good. .
theviewfromhere chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
That made me smile, seroiusly. Half because of House's constant fangirl/sque references, and half because it remimded me of the time my friend tried to teach me how to play chess. (“Yes, look, I just moved my knight…oh, that’s my bishop. I can’t do that then, can I?”)

Very nice, very cute. Definitely brightened my day! (Which, by the way, on a Monday, was no small feat.)

Way to go!
achildofthestars chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
-Nice- I liked it! LOL.
rikkurox chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
I like it, very cute!
Misura chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
Sque~e~e! This was a delightful morsel of writing - delightful enough, I should add, to reduce me to fangirl-level and leave me without much intelligent vocabulary to use. Loved it.