|Reviews for Paper Walls|
| mabidiso chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
Oooooh, awesome sexual tension. Only thing I'd have liked to see added: when you wrote that Sasuke's temper was so frayed that he snapped at poor shy Hinata, I pictured him cradling her face in his hands and giving her a lovely kiss in apology. That would have sent several ninja to the moon fueled by vastly different engines.
| Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
| mewmewgodess chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Loved this one-shot! The plot was really good, and I loved the ending. Some parts were pretty vague, but that just added to the feel of the story. Loved the entire story, beginning to end!
| kasmo chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
It was amusing to read Neji and Sasuke's interactions with each other. The subtle building of their relationship was nice.
| Red Sky at Morning chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
i loved it. both sasuke and neji were very IC and i agree with anabel sinclair about this being too good to be a oneshot.
| Shiragikun chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
xD Sasuke, ever the Prince of Darkness... :) At least Neji beat Sasuke a couple of times, or else Sasuke's ego would have been horrendous.
Descriptive parts on the spars, but I still can't get over the SasuNaruness that sort of defeated the feelings behind the SasuNeji...Hmm...
Lovely ending. Loved it. ;D
| Dorku No Renkinjutsushi chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
Your Neji continues to make the shallow fangirl in me scream and melt into an incoherent puddle.
Amusingly enough, your Sasuke does something awfully similar.
So, in summary...guh.
| trishika chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
man, the unresolved sexual tension here is incredibly well-written. i really enjoyed this. well done. :D
| BellaLugosi chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
WOW. THIS FIC WAS ABSOLUTELY EXCELLENT. ALL OF THE CHARACTERS WERE WRITTEN EXACTLY AS YOU WOULD HAVE SEEN THEM DONE IN THE SHOW!
| anabel sinclair chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
This is too good to remain a one-shot...just wanted to throw that out there.
Good job here, really liked the sas-uke centric train of thought and how by contrasting their characters, you really develop Neji.
Now if you'd just consider the off the wall remark..maybe?
| Nozomi-sama chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
That was great. Fluid, smooth writing with a good amount of description, good characterization, and few errors. I really like that you didn't put in a mass overload of fluffy loveness in this story. I mean, of course I love fluffy loveness, but sometimes it just doesn't work with Neji and Sasuke.
Since this is something you wrote a long time ago, I've got no criticisms because your writing has probably improved quite a bit since you worte this, ne? Erm..so, yeah. It's was quite good. Nice job.