Reviews for Gundam Seed Purpose
exia00 chapter 64 . 9/26/2009
This story was amazing, but I have a bit of advice for you to watch out for. You kinda almost hit the border with the techinques like how they did in Gundam G fighter with no explantion, but the good thing that you did with that was explaining it with technolgy. Just try it keep more realistic. Here is a oc or two for the sequel.

" Another war? Good now I can show them what happens when you work hard and intesely for what you got."

Name: Branden Kamal

Age: 17

Hair color: black

Hair style: short( military cut)

eye color: Brown

Genetics: Natural

Bio:Branden rmer member of Phantom Pain and has been rogue pilot since the signing of the Junius Seven Treaty. His parents were killed in a terrosit attack by anti narutal extermists and after that was recruited by anti-codinator training camp. He at the near end of the war ecsape from Phantom Pain because he got sick of worker for a bunch lazy ass idiots that keep saying the enemy of man kind must be fought, but the are the ones sitting around and doing nothing, but complain. He was in the same roup as Sven Cal the war he was offered to join the Sensou faction by Vincent Racth and only addpicated because after hearing that they would be getting into alot of fights with multiple people ment he would get to fight more and increase his skills. His view on coodinators are changed only a bit, but he doesn't socialize with them or anyone for that fact. His personality is tough, cold, and harsh. Deep inside howvever he has understanding and some what supportive side in him. He does sometimes get flash backs about the anti-coondiator camp and sometimes whispers "Kill coodinator" when he is in a mobile suit. Branden wants fight any strong oppent out their and defeat them to so his power. His skin color sepellates he has either south African or Middle Eastern hertiage. he wears a long black leather jacket and his old blue ensign uniform.

I'll put about his moblie suit in another review okay. Also could you pair him up with Meyrin Hawke. that would be intresting to see how he develops. also could you during the 2nd war have that Noah starts to develop romantic feelings for Diana. That would be real amusing and intresting. Hwoever kinda hard, but knowing you'll make work.
Kojiro Kun chapter 64 . 9/26/2009
A very intresting ending that leaves more quenstions then answers, i will definately read the sequel since i would want to know what would be going on. As for a OC can i suggest a pilot for vincent's task force?

Name: Sasaki kojiro(named after the famous japanese swordsman) Kojiro was a member of ORB's mobile suit forces and during the war, he took down most of his opponents using only his beam saber and his uncanny ways of reading a opponents move, it was this that allows him to have enough power to keep on fighting for twice the standard operating time. Kojiro is a 18 year old young man who enlisted on his birth day, he is a coordinator who has been trained has a swordsman since birth and has therefore managede to use some of the moves in a mobile suit. Kojiro is tall, at a height of 1.93 meters and has shoulder length hair which he keeps in a ponytail while fighting, his eyes are coal black and he always carries blades with him, his favorite being his katana while other blades are hidden on him. He does not like guns but he understands the need for them, he is a very serious person, who likes to mediate in his free time, he is not very social and when he fights, it is in a zen like state where he is totally the sake of making friends, he is studying humor fevertly, although the jokes he says are usually not funny or are ruined by his serious face and tone.

Mobile suit: Kenshin(which according to my friend means the heart of the sword)

What it is: the Kenshin is basically a heavily modified strike,it head is covered with a "horseHair" helemet that only exposes the eyes, the rest of the body is covered with what seemes to be full samurai armour, it's weapons include a spear and three swords.


The Kenshin's horsehair: The Kenshin's horsehair is really strands of highly sensitive scanners that can detect enemies even if they are under mirage collide, this system is so sensitive that it has a 80% chance of telling the pilot what an opponent is going to do, this is done by scanning the way the energy is being sent within a enemy, for example energy directed towards a saber means a enemy will use melee.

The Kenshin's armor: The armour protecting the vital spots of the machine is covered with the same material that is used in the akatsuki giving the kenshin the ability to defeclt shots aimed at these areas, the catch being that energy must be used to activate it, the armor also boasts thrusters that are specifically placed to give the kenshin peak speed, mobility and gaulets also boast the beam guns used in the construction of the gouf.

The Kenshin's weapons: The weapons wielded by the kenshin are a kodachi, a katana ,a nodachi and a spear. The kodachi is made totally from energy as the energy required to make the length of a kodachi is the least compared to the other weapons. The katana is made out a special sharp metal that allows it to block beams and cut phaseshit armor, its purpose is to be used when energy needs to be saved. The nodachi is made out of the same metal as the katana, the only difference is that the edge is that of a chainsaw chain, whose teeth's edge are actual diamonds this was desgined to cut things that may not be cuttable, it requires energy to run the chainsaw chain. The spear's blade has a beam edge and are spilt in two down the middle, where a beam cannon resides, the beam cannon can be used to shoot a long beam, a short beam, a extension to increase the spear;s range and a positron(antimatter) blast, the spear is basically the kenshin's long range weapon, it only being a spear so as to better fit in with the orential theme.

History:The kenshin was commionised by ORB as a way to pay homage to the original strike, only with a oriential feel to it, it was transfered to the sensou along with its pilot as a sign of support for the organisation

So this is it, my OC and his mobile suit. i realise that this OC and mobile suit maynot be suitable as they are so feel free to change it any way u like, i hope u like it and it's concept, pls PM me if u require more info or more detials.
unafraid chapter 64 . 9/26/2009
Overall, an interesting epic. I'm impressed that you've managed to stick with this, and I'm looking forward to the sequel. I'm glad that so many received happy endings, especially with the Druggies and Nena - fates that they weren't able to receive canonically. And I'm pleased with how you changed Nena. Will she appear in the sequel?
EmperorDraco7 chapter 64 . 9/26/2009
Great story, although I didn't like the idea of sending the Duel, Buster, Blitz, Dagger and Aegis into the sun (aka being destroyed) or even Aisha's death at all because they could be very useful in the sequel. Anyway well done.
BIGGZ1344 chapter 64 . 9/26/2009
So Destiny will be next, well I'm curious about Shinn though, how will he react to Vincent.

well I'll be waiting, and about my OC either with Vincent or an Extremist Anti-Blue Cosmos Faction
unafraid chapter 61 . 9/21/2009
...I'm afraid that I don't understand the common fan perception that Nena is some sort of... slut. While her conduct upon meeting Setsuna for the first time was certainly unusual, she remained attracted to him for another four years. Please tell me, how is this "sluttish" behavior?
EmperorDraco7 chapter 63 . 9/20/2009
Great final battle, I really liked how it went and how Uragi was finally defeated. Great story!
exia00 chapter 63 . 9/18/2009
Great chapter. The final battles were really good however I wished Gekido had fought more, but still he went out figthing. R.I.P Gekido Jaeger( You better be alive). One of most surpiseing things was Vincent Ratch's character going that far. I didn't see that comeing and it was really good. Real tragic about Aisha,Goud, and the others. Hope Michelle is okay. When you put the next chapter up I'll offer two ocs of my for the destiny story. Finally if don't have offer plans for the druggies then...

Noah: Let me make a request. Allow me take the pilots of Calamity,Forbidden, and Raider under my "care".

exia00: Okay this is weird. What you up to you lunatic.

Noah: Oh nothing it's just I saw how skilled those three were and I'm alaways looking were new skilled pyschos to recruit in my team.

exia: Well thats for Solider-ms to decide. Any way great chapter looking forward for the last one.
EmperorDraco7 chapter 62 . 9/18/2009
Excellent job, I'm surprised that Gekido had the Eternal recover the Druggie machines and it was great that Vincent saved Flay from her canon fate. I hope the final battle will be something worth seeing, update soon.
EmperorDraco7 chapter 61 . 9/16/2009
Whoa, Hibiki is still alive? This is going to be a shock to Kira and to both Cagalli and Canard as well. Anyway, I hope you will update soon.
Hellshadow chapter 61 . 9/15/2009
Another great chapter. The last fight is gonna be a doozy.
exia00 chapter 61 . 9/15/2009
Wow alot surpiseing twists. Smith is Hibiki,Logan been shot ( hope his going to live, then again sadly probaly not.) The fight between Noah and Gekido was great , can't wait for round 2. Also I like to make a request if thats okay. If Noah's guaiz isn't severly damged and he can still fight could he have a reunion with John and Diana. Also can Noah fight Ash grey to if heshows up. Just asking and just to remende you Noah and Diana don't excatly get along , but he enjoys seeing her every time he gets the chance to. Great chapter final battles going to be intense.
Star1X chapter 60 . 9/14/2009
Your oc was whining a lot more than Kira did in some parts, but no one bitched at him. /
JC chapter 60 . 9/12/2009
This is Great.

It,s much better then the show,I always think it was too,Pro-coordinator.

It hard to find a story that is balance,like your is.

After this do you think you make a crossover story?
Hellshadow chapter 60 . 9/12/2009
Zala returns! Holy crap. Great chapter. Didn't expect that. Keep it up.
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