Reviews for The Ostrich
JasmineGabrielle chapter 7 . 1/2
You are so clever to have thought of a way out for the Captain like that and I am so pleased you did. I also loved the way you wrote the Baroness as I too think she is not cold and heartless but in fact rather warm and misinterpreted by many (as shown by her gracious goodbye in the film). Thoroughly enjoying this story.
Guest chapter 18 . 3/24/2015
WOW that is all I can say about this ff. EPIC writing by an IMAGINATIVE author.
UnfollowTheSun chapter 18 . 2/26/2015
Wow! What a heart wrenching bit of writing! I had a tear in my eye when Georg was flogged at the von Trapp Villa in front of his peers & so determined not to cry out in pain so as not to give Zeller the know how to provoke a readers emotions. Then when the Captain begged Max for the gun to kill himself because he thought his family were dead, it tugged on the heartstrings even more & the part where Maria tried to ease Georg's pain by kissing his scars was so touching. Although I think she should have conveyed to him that he is no coward but a hero, he beats himself up too much, poor guy. This is now one of my favourite fanfictions.
Scot chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
I agree with ForeverJulie - I wanted Zeller to get killed off - the rotten scumbag!
Samantha chapter 2 . 5/24/2014
Had me in tears such a brilliant story congratulations xxx
Womenreligiousfan chapter 18 . 12/25/2012
This is an awsome overcoming ptsd story!
Honkytonkangel chapter 18 . 9/6/2012
So cool and so sweet. Loved the vulnerability they both showed and how they wanted to protect the other. Hope this is the beginning of a fabulous new start for them. They deserve it. Loved it.
som04 chapter 18 . 9/6/2012
oh, this one was so sweet, I really enjoyed reading this one.
Can't wait for the next chapter, hope your back soon.
Great work, keep it up. :):)
liz.onia chapter 18 . 9/5/2012
Yay, you updated! And it was an incredibly awesome update, too! I'm so glad that Georg and Maria made up. Keep up the brilliant work :)
liz.onia chapter 17 . 7/28/2012
I really enjoy your story! Keep up the good work!
som04 chapter 17 . 7/20/2012
I enjoyed this, i really enjoyed the father and son bonding, treating Friedrich like a man, thats sweet and about time too.

lovely written, hope you return soon. keep up the great work :):)
Scot chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
Aww - you do feel so sorry for Captain von Trapp when you read that last chapter. It's good that he tells Maria and lets his feelings show - but going out in the pouring rain without even a jacket, it's a miracle he didn't catch his death of cold!
Hyper1Emo0 chapter 16 . 4/26/2012
Wow. This is a really good story. I really like it. Good job! Keep it up!
Honkytonkangel chapter 16 . 4/25/2012
Another fab chapter. That flashback was so sad I swear I wanted to cry right along with Georg. But it's good he's finally letting his emotions go. Very happy he is not holding anything back from Maria. Hope they get out of Europe safely. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
som04 chapter 16 . 4/25/2012
omg, this was wonderfully written, keep up the great work, hope you return soon. :):)
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