I tried again giving you the benefit of the doubt but when I saw that Gohan fainted just from turning Super Saiyan even just struggling against Haku? I was right to drop this right from the start.

How is Gohan weaker than some of the Naruto cast of characters? Orochimaru and even the Kyuubi would be a fly swat compared to Gohan’s powers, let alone his base.

Lol this is a really bad story but you can feel better about yourself since you're fanfiction is not the worst since I see a fan manga where DBS Goku loses to the Akatsuki because of Ninja abilities even though Goku in his own universe took on abilities like the Akatsuki in his universe and won against them and able to resist them but screw that the author of that fan manga has the Akatsuki faster than Goku and more powerful than him.

A character who can destroy universes lol I will give you some advice don't use overpowered characters for a anime universe that is weaker than them unless you have a good plan for the story to make it entertaining with a overpowered Character if not it's just doesn't work.

Your story just break the logic of Naruto when come to power scale if every Ninja's is as powerful as super Saiyan's that can destroy solo systems then why the hell madara need the 10 tails which made him only moon level by the way to use the infinite tsukuyomi on planet level scale.

He needs the 10 tails power to be this strong to use it since he doesn't have it himself.

Just do better next time. Good luck whichever fanfics you make next time.

ewwwwwwwwww... ewwwwwwwwww... ... cringe max op

Wow people in 2008-2011 really loved shitty fan fics

This fanfiction is terribly poorly done, the characterization of the characters is pitiful. You literally grabbed and placed Gohan at a level below a measly shinobi. Anyone with 4 brains knows that an SJJ is more powerful than ninjas in the world of Naruto. If you don't know anything about the world of Dragon Ball, don't write anything. Your narration and spelling are excellent, but it doesn't make up for your terrible characterization and humiliation of a character you don't even know how to write. I couldn't even get to chapter 4 because I ended up getting bored and saying wtf every fucking second. The truth is, a shame.

This guy is trolling, even for 2008 times. Super Saiyan 4 will Blinkstomop 100,000 Kyuubi’s at the same time.

bullshit. super sayians are capable of blowing a planet.
not in a gay way. the most kyubi can do is blow a mountain. not a broke back one either.

Dude if like 95% reviews are negative there is obviously something wrong with fic

shit fic.

Being realistic, this story is very poorly planned to use gohan well, the only nerf you clarified that he had is not being able to use his saiyan transformations at the beginning of the story, but you didn't say that you took away his true powers, being that even in state The base would still be too powerful for the ninjas, apart from the fact that their presence there in the story does not change almost anything

Before I decided to post this, I checked your profile and noticed that you haven’t posted in a while. I dunno if you’ve abandoned this account or have picked up writing on a new account on a different website, but I felt like saying this either way.

I remember reading this years ago. Back then, I thought it was peak fanfiction. Now that I’m looking at it again, I can’t really compute the idea of a cell games saga Gohan bring nerfed to the point that run of the mill Shinobi are able to take on Super Saiyans. I wouldn’t have had a problem with this if you gave a reason such as,” the transmission between universes weakened Gohan to early Dragonball levels of power” because that’s one of the most reasonable excuses. You didn’t even do that though.

Going by PL, in early Dragonball, people were capable of blowing up moons( ie. Roshi). That was when PL was in the early 100’s. I’m not sure how much bigger the DB Earth is compared to their moon, but Frieza blew up planets with a PL of 530,000. By the time the Cell saga came around, the Z fighters had already surpassed Frieza’s Final PL. See the problem?

In any case, for new readers of this fic, expect a Gohan that is nowhere near his true power, and a story that’s basically the OG Naruto timeline Gohan( his presence doesn’t really change anything). For people who aren’t fans of Dragonball or haven’t watched the Dragonball series, it won’t really affect you so much as those who are/ do watch it.

Terribly unrealistic. Gohan would be too op for this entire universe.

author be curse for this BS you sick twisted Naruto simp

Damn! Lost me on the first chapter. That's pretty bad. A super Saiyan has the power to blow up planets with ease. Like. Literally in one blast.

If you remember. Freeza was able to blow up a planet with ease in his base form. A super Saiyan. Is more powerful than Freeza's final form. Conclusion. There is no one on this miserable little planet. That is more powerful than a super Saiyan.

The only ones cutting it even close would be Kaguya or the Juubi. A super Saiyan is a god among mortals. He would be more powerful than the sage and worshipped as a god in just base super Saiyan.

I don't see Orochimaru being able to wipe out planets with ease. Just once. Once! I would love to just see a fic on here that wasn't afraid to show off the true power of the super Saiyan with Gohan. But. They always fuck up the power scaling.

I want an OP slaughter fest damn it. I want him to just flick people's foreheads with his finger to defeat them. I want Danzo, Akatsuki, and every villain to truly fear him. I want him to unite the nations in a way not seen since the sage and his otherworldly all powerful might. Of which a super Saiyan is literally more powerful than.

The super Saiyan is literally the stuff of legends. It was something the planet conquerer/destroyer Freeza. Feared. The reason he genocided an entire species of powerful fighters. Hell. Even Bardok could have annihilated the Hokage with ease.

And he blew up planet Vegeta. Just to try to stop this legendary thing from appearing. A legend even greater than the sage. Because the super Saiyan was not just on one planet. The sage was not feared by planet destroying monsters. And you. Want to sit here, and tell me that Orochimaru is more powerful than him? The insanity.