Your story is absolute trash. You are such a naruto wanker it's not even funny. You have fucking Haku going 1 on 1 with Gohan at full power near his prime. You don't want constructive criticism because you know your story is shit

Epic story, I loved how you wove it.

Well worth the read.

Sorry I haven't written many reviews. I have just been in agreement with a lot of the other readers that Gohan shouldn't be this... nerfed. That SAID... I think you explained why well enough, and I am trying to suspend my disbelief so that I may truly enjoy this story you have crafted.

Wrong if ssj was 2 tails ssj2 would be 4 ssj3 16 ssj4 160 tails goes like this ssj x50 ssj2ssj2x2 ssj3ssj2x4 ssj4ssj3x10 so by ssj2tails ssj4160tails so ya that happened

It is a bit weird to compare Gohan's ability and power to Kakashi and Zabuza's. Especially considering how Gohan basically have enough power to destroy the planet if he wanted to. And since when is Kakashi a sensor capable of measuring others' level of chakra? So in that regard my suspension of disbelief just went pass the point of no return.

You telling me that Gohan...TEEN GOHAN IN HIS NEAR PEAK PRIME loses to Haku in a contest of speed? EVEN AT BASE LEVEL? INCLUDING THAT GOHAN HAS TO POWER UP TO SSJ2 TO TAKE DOWN HAKU AND HIS ICE MIRROR JUTSU? NAW BRUH! You need to be cured of the Toriyama Syndrome.

Email me some naruko sasuke fanfictions

U got anymore like this

I really liked this. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel even if it looks like it hasn't been updated for a few years.

good introduction to Kurama the nine tailed beast

Best crossover I have ever read but should made gohan appear a little bit stronger in ssj2 form.

When is gohan going to fight pain and madara?

Whay cant u simply write ,,special beem cannon,, and not those complicate words

Good story, but gohan taking on homochimaru as a SSJ is a joke. Gohan would win in base without any effort honestly. But it's your story. Pretty good so far.