Listen I completely understand you wanting to limit Gohan's transformations so that he doesn't steamroll the Naruto world, but him turning ssj against orochimaru and still admitting that he would lose and need ssj2? Are you seriously putting orochimaru at the same level as Super Perfect Cell? Seriously?

And also despite his transformations being locked, which I think is a good thing, you absolutely slaughtered his durability and strength to a fragment of what it was in dbz. So I don't know the reasoning for that either. Like seriously haku out speeds Gohan at peak base form? If you had said that his physical stats had been nerfed it would be different, and Gohan would be training much harder to get them back, but you didn't you're just upscaling all Naruto characters to absolutely insane durability strength and speed for no given reason.

While I had many gripes with this fanfic, but it is yours so write how you want. After reading the orochimaru fight I think I'm done here, you say that you want a balance, but absolutely screw up in almost every fight you make.

It's a very good fanfiction however not realistic Gohan would not even need the transform the Super Saiyan for any character Naruto just being an honest no early Goku from Dragon Ball this would make more sense

...piccolo blew up the moon in DragonBall. Not z, the very beginning when max power didn't even reach 1000. He didn't even have to charge up, he just DID it. Gohan could vaporize the planet. If he put some effort in, most people wouldn't even have time to notice it coming... All the Shinobu have on him is stealth.

It's your story, you can make the power levels match up however you like. It's a shame how WRONG you are, but I'm capable of stretching my SoD for the sake of an entertaining story.

This is ridiculous, Gohan would’ve been able to sense Orochimaru. And like I said before, Gohan is vastly superior in power than anyone else in the ninja world.

Why are the cast of Naruto able to keep up with someone like Gohan?

its supposed that nappa is at madara's level but this is a fanfic so its okay lol

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Sage mode uses Nature Chakra, Sage chakra isnt a thing

lol, lost my appetite to read due to the hard nerf, could've just wrote it as the dimensional hopping weakened Gohan and he either have to retrain or go back to his original dimension to fix himself

Wow... the guy who reviewed before me... gods I ha e laughed that hard, but when someone that stupid can't see how awesome this is what can you expect. I have read and reread this fiction for years now, and besides some small criticism from myself, I think that this is fucking perfect. Get your head out of your ass you moron and spare this author your petty nonsense.

ok i endured this shit so with the nerf for the nerf fuck you but ssj Gohan still do no damge to Gara
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about 9/10 reviews are negative. You're clearly doing something wrong.

So I learned from this fanfic that kid goku shit stomps this teen Gohan. kid goku is moon level because he scaled to Roshi that destroyed the Moon

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