constructive criticism? you slouch too much. practice better posture.

The fact that I first read this story when I was 9 and and re-read so many times it never gets old my favorite crossover story ever and the fact that people bitch and cry like they could write one better is hilarious.

I read this story years ago and am rereading it again. I love how in this chapter, you essentially came up with ultra instinct before akira toriyama, that's awesome lol

I was right with you until the AN at the end of Chapter 1, Vegeta and Nappa Destroyed a fucking Planet on the way to Earth, the Kyubi can barely Destroy a city and now you're saying the kyubi is stronger than SSJ? Done

dude you made this too close to the canon to make any changes
its like gohan was never there and story will still be the same
so whats the point of inserting gohan

wasn't that sarutobi hirizen
& whats namikaze ayashi

Gohan is too week and untrained for this story. At this point in time he can destroy planets with little effort and yet a A rank Shinobi is schooling him..

For fuck's sake, you could've just said that this narutoverse just has everything at a higher level than in other universes, because if you said that making a meteor crater in that universe was solar system level in the DBZ universe that gohan came from, it would've prevented so much cancer and would have protected more of my brain cells, but you didn't do that, and it just makes the fic look like it has the shittiest concept known to man. Hell, you could've just said that the travel to the other dimensions sapped him of most of his strength, making him less than a trillionth as strong as he was when he fought Cell.

Yep, well, that's about enough of that sh*t. I thought the story was looking somewhat interesting but now I can just say that it's complete shit. 1- Kakashi's sensei's name was Minato, the Third Hokage was called Sarutobi Hiruzen. Second, there is absolutely f*ck all that could threaten Gohan in the Narutoverse. Gohan would not need to tap into his ki for the bridge fight. I didn't even finish reading this chapter, this sh*t is just that f*cking bad. Your writing isn't all that bad, grammar and whatnot, it's all pretty good. You information sources though? That needs a lot of work. Overall, the story idea isn't a bad one, it's execution on the other hand, it needs to be redone.

Why are people being so rude he is writing a cool story stop bashing on it.

in this story gohan can blow up the planet and orochimaru can't blow the planet but orochimaru is stronger than gohan who ever writes this fuck you don't watch dbz just watch naruto keep thinking someone in naruto can inflict damage to z figthers

gohan base power after cell games should be a 10 million or 15 but in this f**king fanfic he's afraid of gaara with ssj can all the writers in this crossover can't make a good crossover story that doesn't nerfed gohan or dbz character and overpower naruto character or villain you stupid author

Ok so Sasuke's curse seal was the seal of heaven right? Well what was Gohan's and what would his 2nd level seal form look like I once saw a picture of a Saiyan in a super form kinda like ssj4 but instead of the great ape look it was more dragon like

At the beginning I thought like that, but I came up with a simple example, gravity, h, k constants, have a difference in the world of DBZ than that of NARUTO so it is possible to keep the powers balanced, as well as the genjutsus which gohan can overcome as saiyayin with training etc. There are always ideas, neither could I bear those odious criticisms for no reason etc. Thanks for your time.

Lol i was about to recommend that you post something to indicate how Gohans powers would wrk in this fic: that is whether he gets nerfed and how such would work but I see you’ve done that.
The only other recommendation I can make thus far is to put it at the beginning of the fic so people know what they are dealing with straight up.