im going to assume tobiramas name is shisue cause his true name wasnt known at the time. good story though and k hopr to see more of it!... its been over a year since someone last commented wow...

I was about to comment that Tobirama was killed years earlier then that but.. i dunno if that information was known when this fic was written.

I hope you do realize that the second Hokage's name was Tobimara.

Cringe worthy... That's all I can see. Besides you have a very bad attitude as well.

I thought the second homage was called Tobirama?

YEAH BABY YEAH!

When you write a storie like this you have to use the right name so
Nidaime Hokage's name is Tobirama Senju! You make him so OOc like for Hashirama! If its what you want say it to your reader at the begining!
Thats so bad. You cant act like that

Nidaim hokage's name is Tobirame Senju. Not shinsui Senju

Love the funny parts the most,

The 2nd hokage name is Tobirama. Why did you change his name?

Otooji-granduncle

Great job! Can't wait for an update!

The second hokage name is Tobirama and he died fighting ginkaku and kinkagu and twenty elite jonin's, also the first hokage was not in the first war, since the second led the leaf in that war, sarutobi led the leaf through both the second and third wars,

... a little comment on Akatsuki... it doesn't matter how one "personally" pronounces it, because if it's not pronounced correctly, you're making fun of the Japanese language.

What about Mito Uzumaki, which was the first Jinchuuriki. Two Kyuubi in one world.