Reviews for Benden's Worst Kept Secret
Jedi Knight 13 chapter 19 . 9/14/2011
I just read all the chapters. Well done. I enjoyed them all. The humor in the chapters was terrific and last chapter was so poignant.
AnitaA chapter 19 . 4/11/2010
Lovely, just lovely. You capture so much in so few words. Thank you for bringing such emotion, so quickly.
ToDifferentToBeReal chapter 19 . 10/29/2009
Love the drabbles, I started them at the New Kitchen Table but then I found you here at and read the ones that weren't at NKT. I love F'lar and Lessa and I wish that there was so much more of their relationship addressed in the books. Again love your drabbles.
Khelc-sul Renai chapter 19 . 3/28/2009
Aww... this is so sad/sweet...

Well written. Good reads.
Khelc-sul Renai chapter 16 . 3/28/2009
You have there characters down perfectly.

Well written! God read.
Khelc-sul Renai chapter 11 . 3/28/2009
...Are all of these destined to make me go Aw?

Well written. Love it.
Khelc-sul Renai chapter 5 . 3/28/2009
Aw...

Absolutely adorable...

Well written. Good read.
Khelc-sul Renai chapter 3 . 3/28/2009
That is so adorable... I'd love to have seen it...

Well written.
Khelc-sul Renai chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
This would leave me laughing too...

Fun read!
calenlily chapter 16 . 1/16/2009
/Gasps for breath/ Oh! This is ... wow. Simple and so telling. You've created such emotional impact in such a short little scene. And your capture Lessa and F'lar's characters so accurately. I'm in awe, and slightly jealous.

"He forgets his worries for the moment, gathers her into his arms and makes love to her like he did that night over twenty Turns ago."

I'm a little confused by this line; 'that night over twenty turns ago' is obviously referring to a specific instance, but I can't think what it is. Any way you can clarify that line?

~calen
calenlily chapter 18 . 1/16/2009
Sweet and hot and such a perfect characterization of Lessa's conflicted emotions at that point in time. (She's so in denial, heh heh.) I love it!

One little typo: "She'd almost forgotten she was supposed to be concentrating on her remaining duties /fr/ the day" should be "for".

~calen
calenlily chapter 19 . 1/16/2009
Oh! Such a sad note to end on. Lovely writing though.

When you say you updated what you had are leaving it at that, does that mean you're all done working on this story, or just that you're leaving it for now and aren't going to worry too much about needing to continue? Because I really hope you add more at some point.

~calen
dawnsfire chapter 19 . 1/13/2009
Sorry you're ending this. I enjoyed them a lot! Nicely done.
xdefunctaccountx chapter 19 . 1/13/2009
It's as though that last chapter were written just for me, as though you read my mind. So appropriate, I just got back from his funeral and read this...

Also, care to explain Only You?
Miz636 chapter 19 . 1/13/2009
I've just read them all. They are all very well done. That last one was very very sad but still peaceful. I really enjoyed these and I'd like some more.
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