|Reviews for Taking Chances|
| TheAnimeLover97 chapter 1 . 5/2/2016
| VyletRayne chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
Cool, but you could have gotten away with rating it T.
| Teresa Kaiju chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
The abrupt shift the the story caused a sort of whiplash that made the story less enjoyable.
| Amber sama chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
it was cute
| Wingweaver chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
Fast paced but sweet. The pair is new to me but I'm already loving it. Question though are Filipino? Cuz "wakas" is Filipino and it means end. Love the plot by the way. :3
| hyrami chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
Well , this is really a fast-paced story but it's fun.
And it's also creative to let them together first before become "Soeur".
| Kiros Razer chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
This was an interesting change and I liked it.
| Shawntail chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
I just love these two...
beautiful story as usual -
| clarec97 chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
Hi, first of all I would like to apologise for reading your fanfic in random order. I enjoy reading this like any of your other works, I like the way you twist the story around. It remind me of what Sachiko and Youko did to Sei when she refuse to make Shimako her petite souer. I like the part where Sei played the part of getting under Sachiko's skin.
Great story, thank you
| piglets chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
it is really a very nice kind of yumi being sachiko petite souer ... but its a kind of strange ... sorry for that ...
| rovdru2000 chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
This is refreshing for no one attempted anything like it.
| Syaoran Li Clow chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
Obviously, they’ll die of embarrassment if the truth behind Yumi’s ceremony were rebelled.
I really liked your version of how these two became close to each other; especially with Sachiko’s wish of not hurting Yumi by involving her on the Ogasawara world. Thanks for not bringing out Suguro on the story; we already know how miserable Sachiko’s life is thanks to him, so everything felt right for them by the time their shared love as one.
Thumps up for you on this one; now let’s go for your third fanfics.
| kurakami chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
Gosh that much more interesting than the way it actually happened. Great story!
| Spikesagitta chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
ah..if only what you wrote would come true in the series...but alas...
anyway, sweet, love it
| Tsuma-chan chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
I liked it a lot…
I (being the love bug that I am) would have loved some elaborations on the love part, since you started it, but I have a good imagination to help me. Rofl ;)
I kind’a like the idea of finding a new way for them to become soeurs (I’m prolly going to steal that idea hook, line and frying pan, but I’ll just swear that I came up with the idea first and that if you sue me I’ll throw dictionaries at you ;)
As you state in the end, you got lazy. I think you should work the story. It’s a good story, and you definitely show that you have the skills to make it better. – My solution for lazy hours thinking: Coffee, and plenty of it ;) Anyway, just a solution. Make it a classic in the Marite section and there is plenty premise to spread it over a few chapters.