Reviews for Shut Him Up
Cerulean Canary chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
For me, the ending is Sasori loved Deidara too because he wished no one will shut Deidara up, in other words, no one will kiss Deidara. Because Deidara was his 3
AkioKuro chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
I know that you hated writing the lemon but it was very fitting for this story. I believe that somewhere deep inside Sasori truly loves Deidara but is to ignorant to admit it. Overall this was a very touching story
Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
This story is always so hard to read :(
I end up crying and stuff aaaaah
KurohimeHitsugaya chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
I don't get why you don't like intimate scenes. You're good at writing them and they add emotion to a story. :/
MyBlueEyes chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
I loved it, it was very good written

But I found another first pov thing:
Deidara asked in a teasing voice, annoying "me" sincerely. The red head struggled not to throw poisonous weapons at him.

Thank you for this good one-shot! 3
LittleGirly chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
I thick you did rly well on diz fick a job wel dne ) loved it D
DeeaE chapter 1 . 2/11/2011

i crieddddd
IceQueenMirrorQueen chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
Awesome story.

I think that what makes the ending so sweet is the fact that Sasori has been trying to convince himself that he doesn't feel anything at all towards Deidara yet in the end he doesn't deny that he's showing concern (in whichever emotion it manifests itself as) for his partner
Starcloudy94 chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
it was good
amber chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
O.o I actually really liked that one. Most of the time I spend all night searching and searching for a decent fanfiction, but the ending of this one was really...

well, needless to say, it got me thinking...and I'm still thinking. good job!

I like stories that make me think like that-analyzing all the possible scenarios and backing them up with evidence (okay, yeah, I'm a total DORK). And this was so open-ended as to provide me with the kind of thinking I like to do...

missanimefan chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
AW! Loved the ending! SO SWEET! Great work! I give you a 10 out of 10! :D
rebelliousangel94 chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
OMG! The ending made me cry! Your so emotional! I have to cry at the beauty of your skills now!
xCrystalized chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
Akuma-danna chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
wow this was really good I loved how you made it so Saso-chan was completely emotionless and at the end how he actually felt something
Maelza chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
this is a really great story, and i know how u feel about the writing lemon bit lol :P I had trouble writing it at first aswell _ but now look at me LOL -points to her No Dildo Required- XD but sersly this is a great fanfic, and it could be interpreted as Sasori could love him or not it's a great ending
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