|Reviews for Perfect|
| changeofheart505 chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Kura: *squeals* Continue! Please!
Sakura:*smiles at Kura* Down girl, this was awesome, loved it.
| azab chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
i loved it and i hope you write a sequel to it with a happy ending
| Qu-ko chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
What kind of irritates me about this is that it at first SOUNDS like it's definitely Edo talking, with the bitingly sarcastic tone, but... the things he talks about are just way too out of character for him.
Not him going out with Ryou, I don't mean that; shippings I don't generally consider out of character since they can be so ambiguous. It's stuff like Edo having slept with a ton of other people before and attempting suicide and even crying over a dramatic breakup. None of it sounds like anything he'd do; upon second glance, it reads more like some romantic drama than anything that Edo would bother getting himself into.
The prose is good, so I have to give you credit for that. Your prose is, in fact, far better than quite a few of the authors in the GX section. What bothers me, though, is the characterization. :\
| Doomed To Be Seme AND Uke chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
;~; POOR EDO! "huggles a plushie of him" I always thought Edo's life would be nothing but misery...I really like this bc it really summarizes what Edo has been going through when it comes to relationships...I tink Ryo is good for him bc Edo won't be alone...And Edo is good for Ryo bc Ryo has someone to love
| Serpent at Sunset chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
I secretly enjoy Edo in this despairing role. I suspect Edo doesn't have a lot of luck in romance and a relationship between Edo and Ryo would be nothing less than turbulent.
| mazeru chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
Jyun... this thing is... wow. O.O
I mean it. You did say you wanted to make an emo Edo fic, but this its...