Reviews for Ron Goes To The Mat
Cloaked Glyder chapter 56 . 3/1/2015
"safety net"...do anyone else hav suspicions?
Cloaked Glydr chapter 54 . 3/1/2015
"keep an eye out for strangers"
They sure go a great job on tht :P
Cloaked Glydr chapter 52 . 2/28/2015
THIS IS AN EXAMPLE OF SOMETHING I LEARNED IN CHEM CLASS LAST WEEK. The Stops parents knows of the mess, but they hav not seen it...Schrodinger effect
Cloaked Glydr chapter 51 . 2/28/2015
I love how you hav all these facts in the beginning of ur story and now it can be easier to connect them. The first time I read this i didnt notice it, but now I can reconcile the subtle clues to the ending. Nice job
Cloaked Glydr chapter 50 . 2/28/2015
Oh the do-over prom will hav a pretty big surprise on them...
Cloaked Glydr chapter 33 . 2/27/2015
Dang...about half of this FF is done and Kim and Ron still havnt fully think of each other. Daccu, ur great at making Kim and Ron basically complement each other
Cloaked Glydr chapter 29 . 2/26/2015
you made monkey fist an OOC but in a good way. You make him MUCH more honorable and respectful. Love the pairing u made with him.
Cloaked Glydr chapter 24 . 2/26/2015
"Mickman's Earthmoving" this is significant. I didnt catch this detail the first time i read this tale
Cloaked Glydr chapter 22 . 2/26/2015
U can tell tht Draken's statement is so gonna backfire, famous last words:P. "I shall simply change a few parameters in order to deal with the sidekick" I can tell w/out spoiling the FF that Drakken doesnt does a good job at this
Cloaked Glydr chapter 3 . 2/25/2015
This is why I (no offended, im biased) love XC. In ur description of wrestling, it seems that the wrestler is bounded to the mat, and try to pin each other. In XC, you are basically free to go anywhere. Last year, I scored a varisty part as a freshmen in high school. The practices makes you run distances. Im not a terrific sprinter, and wrestling seems like a fast action, extremely quick event. For XC, you just run 5 ks. However, theres still stradegizing and planning involved in long ditance running, but I like to "take my time" and not feel totally rushed...until the last 200 m of the course :P
Moral Conundrum chapter 48 . 7/6/2014
Sorry, but the whole 'say my name' scene was completely out of place. It REALLY didn't fit the story.
Moral Conundrum chapter 11 . 7/5/2014
Bonnie insults and puts down Ron for how many years and Kim just rolls her eyes?
Ron stands up to her for the first time and Kim goes nuclear?
Going the 'selfish BI*** KP' route, I see.
IcyFlame chapter 47 . 2/20/2013
I'm really enjoying this story!
holydemon00 chapter 47 . 1/1/2013
Kim better took that as an introductory lesson to her career in intelligence. True manipulators can really mess with her mind, her ideal, her belief, not just her love life, with only one tenth the amount of technology Drakken had. And worse, they know how to become national heroes, not petty villain.

Imagine Stalin, or Mao, with the synthodrone technology, they would probably be conquering the world by now.

Kim shouldn't feel bad about falling for the food chain. After all, It's the high-school version of social structure, which is the driving factor for pretty much every single revolution. Of course, glamour and look will eventually lose out to money and authority.
holydemon00 chapter 30 . 12/31/2012
To be frank, normalizing Ron isn't too bad an idea, but it kinda took out the fun of watching his weird antics, and the entire reason Kim was attracted to him in the first place.
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