Reviews for Naruto: FwAdF (Old Version)
arinasution5 chapter 11 . 5/14
NOT TEH YOUUUUTH chapter 2 . 2/8
King of Bahamut chapter 15 . 10/21/2015
not to sound mean but kaiten means rotation by the way love the story and cant wait for more
BetaZackFan chapter 6 . 10/18/2015
ok your author note on gay guy raping people is uncalled for and very offensive. my brother is gay and he is not a rapist
Guest chapter 4 . 10/7/2015
truthfully I was about to stop reading this once I heard the Kyubbi cared for Naruto but it could be worse you might say mobs chase him
Guest chapter 3 . 10/7/2015
I know this is a kenjutsu fic but I was hoping Naruto might learn a little bit of nin or even fuinjutsu to incorporate in his style of fightining other than kage bunshin (and possibly rasengan). (I really hope he incorporates some fuinjustsu their are very few fics that show Naruto at least learning a decent amount and the ones that do overexagerate it)
Guest chapter 3 . 10/7/2015
I love NAruto and all but if NAruto wasn't who he was he'd probably be punished for such disrespect towards the hokage
Guest chapter 2 . 10/7/2015
As much as I want to say you were bashing Sakura this is probably how Sakura would react
Guest chapter 2 . 10/7/2015
Did anything bring about his dislike? cough Gai cough. Epic story though
Guest chapter 31 . 9/14/2015
ok at first then shit
lordtoastkage chapter 13 . 9/8/2015
Gotta love the serenity quote slipped into this chapter :)
Guest chapter 4 . 8/17/2015
Usually I nor the threats at the end but that is something I don't want to tempt at all my god that is scary you have a really good story and it has a very good plot so please do not send those motherfuckers after me please
Guest chapter 4 . 8/14/2015
to the final coment you are evil cool but evil
Guest chapter 31 . 8/12/2015
you are back? are you really? Just fucking tell us already if you are gonna continue this story or what?
Guest chapter 27 . 8/12/2015
you know that raikage's name is A
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