Reviews for Naruto: FwAdF (Old Version)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/20
He saw the drunks beat him into unconsciousness. Due to this one line, I'll stop reading this nonsense
Guest chapter 2 . 1/26
Not worth the read past second chapter unless you like Naruto, the protagonist, being hopelessly stupid and naive. That fixation on Sakura with his near mental retardation is no way to start a quality story regardless of pending power-ups unless it includes a raw intelligence boost or fusion with a more intelligent being. Your writing skills are good, but canon Naruto is repulsive and has a distorted psyche and set of values
Ghost chapter 10 . 10/23/2017
Your stupid he teo of the strongest deamons to ever exist in him plus he is a half deamon it is possible for one of the two to bust the curse seal dumb ass
God of Vampires aka Alucard chapter 1 . 7/10/2017
The only way Naruto could wield Tessaiga was if he was a Hanyou(Half-Demon). So unless you have him be born one,made into one over time,or have Kyuubi make him one then he can't wield the sword properly.
Archangel Igneel chapter 31 . 4/3/2017
Honestly I think I prefer this version to the new one. Naruto is a bit more serious, always like that interpretation, and the story telling is pretty good.
Guest chapter 10 . 3/19/2017
worst fucking fic ever you cunt don't read this fic
Guest chapter 8 . 3/19/2017
went shit
annoyed chapter 1 . 11/23/2016
OMFG the multi shadow clone justu is so annoyin nowdays ...its so over rated and people barely use the rasengan PUT A NEW JUTSU IN FOR NARUTO TO USE MAN
arinasution5 chapter 11 . 5/14/2016
Xbf
NOT TEH YOUUUUTH chapter 2 . 2/8/2016
I WILL DO ANYTHING JUST KEEP GUY AWAY...
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King of Bahamut chapter 15 . 10/21/2015
not to sound mean but kaiten means rotation by the way love the story and cant wait for more
BetaZackFan chapter 6 . 10/18/2015
ok your author note on gay guy raping people is uncalled for and very offensive. my brother is gay and he is not a rapist
Guest chapter 4 . 10/7/2015
truthfully I was about to stop reading this once I heard the Kyubbi cared for Naruto but it could be worse you might say mobs chase him
Guest chapter 3 . 10/7/2015
I know this is a kenjutsu fic but I was hoping Naruto might learn a little bit of nin or even fuinjutsu to incorporate in his style of fightining other than kage bunshin (and possibly rasengan). (I really hope he incorporates some fuinjustsu their are very few fics that show Naruto at least learning a decent amount and the ones that do overexagerate it)
Guest chapter 3 . 10/7/2015
I love NAruto and all but if NAruto wasn't who he was he'd probably be punished for such disrespect towards the hokage
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