|Reviews for Jamais Vu|
| cabbage-for-the-people chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
A little problem with the sentence construction and your tenses, but I liked this nonetheless. I think your drama/angst stories are good enough as they are but you should try to write more happy fanfiction so that you can improve your writing craft. But that's just my opinion. Haha. -hands out virtual candy-
| Wija-chan chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
Ah...I knew it..she committed suicide in the end..;
That was sad...T.T
Mi-chan no BAKA!
Good work. _
| kunoichixxkanna chapter 1 . 1/23/2008
aw thats so sad T-T and tokiya so mean! bleh! hahah but i know wut you mean...but actually i ad already confessed and it turned out like your storie except:
1)i didnt commit suicide (lol)
2)he wasn't as harsh as tokiya (he mind as well have been .)
3)i didnt cry until MUCH later...
| yanagichyan chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
oh god! that's it? that can't be the end! DX
great angtsy there... mi-chan was so cruel and idiotic! if i could ram him down with my car then, i would! poor fuuko.. i do think that fuuko would commit suicide though. the least she would do most probably would be to ram mi-chan with her car! bwahaha, die, mi-chan!
still, i liked it very much. good job!
| Eirist chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
that was heartbreaking *sniffs* i like it. :)