Reviews for When he hunts
Khlarka2 chapter 2 . 2/26/2008
great story! poor bella. update ASAP!
bubbles-are-blue chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
aw...its so sad
ty101 chapter 2 . 2/26/2008
ok hi change bella please you would make her sucha good vampire
topazforever chapter 2 . 2/26/2008
this is a sad story but i luv it!

please keep writing?
crimson hearts chapter 2 . 2/26/2008
will he finally learn his lesson? i hope so:D he needs to stop trying to delay the inevitable and change her:D
Hulktastic chapter 2 . 2/26/2008
it's so cute in a sad kinda way... you know? keep writing!
plainlyironic chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
Update soon.

This is really sad.
Rebellious Vampiress chapter 2 . 2/26/2008
Huh? 106 degree fever and she's all better? or is she? Keep on updating! I still think she's part wolf...lol.
loudie chapter 2 . 2/26/2008
wow that was so good! keep it up.

loudie
ali93 chapter 2 . 2/26/2008
good! write more!
crimson hearts chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
plz update soon this is such a cliffy! does he save her by changing her or does she die? you really know how to write stories that keep you on the edge of your seat:D
ElenaGilbertWarriorQueen chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
OMG!is she going to die?
Devilslawyer123 chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
wow, this is so good, anmd so sad! hope u upd8 soon!

devilslawyer123
sheeparelikesocool chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
what happens?

ek what happens? update!
wingedspirit chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
well this is a good start but why do you have to hurt them like this it seems to be your mo not that I'm complaining just woundering is all? Your story's are I have to say as far as Alice she would not if she saw that she wouldn't just lock herself in her room she would have goon and checked on Bella herself or called Edward she would not have just sat there and not checked on her Best Friend and is going to change her right Alice said it's the only way so he has too or ASAP!
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