|Reviews for When he hunts|
| bubbles-are-blue chapter 2 . 2/26/2008
will she live
| Khlarka2 chapter 2 . 2/26/2008
great story! poor bella. update ASAP!
| bubbles-are-blue chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
aw...its so sad
| ty101 chapter 2 . 2/26/2008
ok hi change bella please you would make her sucha good vampire
| topazforever chapter 2 . 2/26/2008
this is a sad story but i luv it!
please keep writing?
| crimson hearts chapter 2 . 2/26/2008
will he finally learn his lesson? i hope so:D he needs to stop trying to delay the inevitable and change her:D
| Hulktastic chapter 2 . 2/26/2008
it's so cute in a sad kinda way... you know? keep writing!
| plainlyironic chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
This is really sad.
| Rebellious Vampiress chapter 2 . 2/26/2008
Huh? 106 degree fever and she's all better? or is she? Keep on updating! I still think she's part wolf...lol.
| loudie chapter 2 . 2/26/2008
wow that was so good! keep it up.
| ali93 chapter 2 . 2/26/2008
good! write more!
| crimson hearts chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
plz update soon this is such a cliffy! does he save her by changing her or does she die? you really know how to write stories that keep you on the edge of your seat:D
| ElenaGilbertWarriorQueen chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
OMG!is she going to die?
| Devilslawyer123 chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
wow, this is so good, anmd so sad! hope u upd8 soon!
| sheeparelikesocool chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
ek what happens? update!