Reviews for The Wrath of the Half Blood Prince
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SeverusAndHermioneFan chapter 34 . 4/8/2021
New Lily rating: 4/10
Sarah rating: 8/10
Severus rating: 8.5/10
(minus 0.5 points for mentioning Reg crying, that was really stupid. Now for sure Regulus won't listen to Snape)

Potter rating: -99/10 :D
SeverusAndHermioneFan chapter 30 . 4/8/2021
-"I'd expect more from a Gryffindor that assaulting an injured man in his bed," Potter said as he approached.
Ironic to hear that from a marader Potter...

New Lily rating: 4/10
Sarah rating: 8/10
Severus rating: 9/10

Potter rating: -99/10 :D
(included plus 1 point for thankfully)
SeverusAndHermioneFan chapter 28 . 4/8/2021
New Lily rating: 4/10
(plus 1 point for listening and trying to understand and accept)
Sarah rating: 8/10
Severus rating: 9/10
(plus 0.5 point for not being silent, but for telling the truth, explaining the motivation)
SeverusAndHermioneFan chapter 27 . 4/8/2021
I was hoping for identical patronuses! This is one of the most romantic moments in canon! What sucks?

A fox for Lily and a fox for Severus, pretty good.
If the author didn't want the same ones. A raven or panther is much better. The bat is miserable.

Mis-calculated the points in the previous chapter. Here are the correct ones:
Lily rating: 3/10
(plus 1. returning the point as promised in prev. chapter)
Sarah rating: 8/10
Severus rating: 8.5/10
SeverusAndHermioneFan chapter 26 . 4/8/2021
Now Lily rating: 6/10
(Minus 1 for not loving Sev for who he is, but pretending. Just broke up with Potter. She doesn't want to kiss at 17 and flinch from a kiss on the forehead? (If it turns out later that she wanted it on the lips, not the forehead. Or that she liked it so much that she flinched, she'll get her point back))
(Minus 3 for deciding to join the deadly "Order of the Phoenix" without consulting her lover. Very selfish. (That she couldn't tell is not an argument. She doesn't have to talk about the organization, just say she wants fighting with Death Eaters))
Sarah rating: 8/10
Severus rating: 8.5/10
(minus 1 point, for his attitude towards Sarah, yet he was not sincere with her. It would be fair to take away a point, since I took away a point from Lily for that as well)

Potter was probably smirking when he realized that he was now bound to Lily by the Order. Surely it was his request to accept her. I can't wait to see his cocky grin turn into a grimace of rage when he finds out Severus joined with Lily. In fact, Lily was one of the biggest factors in joining for Sev and Dumboldor knew it.

There was no escape from that scumbag Potter anywhere...
SeverusAndHermioneFan chapter 25 . 4/8/2021
Cute filler. Thanks

Now Lily rating: 6/10
Sarah rating: 8/10
Severus rating: 9.5/10
SeverusAndHermioneFan chapter 23 . 4/8/2021
Хорошо проиллюстрировано давление на пару гриффиндор-слизерин

Now Lily rating: 6/10
Sarah rating: 8/10
Severus rating: 9.5/10
(plus 0.5 for the ability to enjoy love in spite of the surrounding pressures of other houses. And the ability to fend off the attack in this chapter and the previous one)
SeverusAndHermioneFan chapter 22 . 4/8/2021
Now Lily rating: 6/10
(plus 0.5 points for understanding that Potter wants to make her suffer from jealousy)
Sarah rating: 8/10
Severus rating: 9/10

It's too bad the story of Sarah's breakup isn't written. It would have been interesting to read how he comforts her and says she was an amazing girl that any guy would have been proud of. And there's nothing wrong with her doubting Severus and being jealous because she knew he was in love with Lily.
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