Reviews for Negative Space
Tomi Lang chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
So amazing and shocking. So beautiful. You left me with no words.

Such a wonderful way to describe this whole thing.
Aza chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
another wonderful work.
hamxham chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
aw.. luv it!
Wolf-of-Words chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
That was beautiful. I loved the way you integrated both Syaorans into this, and the switching between them was seamless. I loved the grammar, the semi-colons, and the way each sentence was finsihed by another. *Claps* Masterful!

Keep it up. :3
parma-violets chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
I loved it - it was a really interesting and different way of writing, and open to a lot of interpreations. I really liked the way they finished each other's sentences ... twins down to the bone, eh? But yeah, it was incredibly sad! But well done, so kudos : )

parma-violets x
Shunatsu chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
Cool. I like the way you link the both of them talking like this, and the wish of the world being perfect was pretty sad in a way, but it WAS slightly confusing, but that's just my brain, don't worry. Good job with it!