Never thought about how the words to that song fit the Pevensies, but you're right; it's perfect! (And by the way, Michael Card is one of my favorite song artists)

A great story. Very good.

WOW that is so Awesome I LOVE IT

I LOVE JESUS TOO

WWJD

PROUD CHRISTIAN

3 nails 1 cross 4given

I love this story! It is so beautiful that it nearly made me cry. And to use one of Micheal Cards songs! He is my favorite celebrity, I always thought he was better than Orlando Bloom or Robert Pattinson. I actually got to hear him in concert and spoke with him after words. I would listen to his tapes before CDs came out and my mother and I have almost all of his stuff. My favorite song of his is El Shaddia (cant spell it though lol). I would love to get to know you better. As for my donomation: I am currently Brethren-In-Christ but I might switch to Russian Orthodox Christian. I love Micheal Cards songs because they are so soulful and beautiful, they are lyrically lovely and theologically sound.

Oh, that was like SO beautiful! I loved every word of it. Oh, and thanks for putting my fic on your alert list! I'm happy would like to read more. Feel free to R&R my other narnian fics too, if you would like to. Keep writing!

I love your creativity! This was great.

it's great!

Aw, I loved it! Glad someone is so open about what Aslan is called in our world - thanks for doing this!

-KCS