|Reviews for dirty secrets|
| Kyuubi-Titan chapter 7 . 7/9/2008
Would this spawn of BBs and Rays have both there powers or a unique fusion of the 2? And if the latter would said child morph into other demons or infernal versions of earth animals?
| azarielthebladed chapter 6 . 4/23/2008
Ok, here's what I see;
Tubby McLardy-Lard(Rae's down-stairs neighbor.) burns down the appartment, as I assume you were leading up to.
Then, Raven gets trapped, somehow, and Red, who just happened to be around, rushes in and saves her. At the hospital, the Titans arrive, and Gar's got Terry. Red notices the 'cute kid,' who then fusses until Red finally holds him... Rae wakes up, delerious from the meds, and wonders why her room is so bright, and full of people, one of whom seems to be a complete stranger.
"Why are you all in my room? And who are you?"
"Rae, Honey, your apartment burned to the ground, and this man pulled you from the wreakage. You're in the hospital, and we all owe this man for saving your life."
"Oh. That's nice. You're a nice man."
"You know, I don't hear that very often."
| azarielthebladed chapter 4 . 4/23/2008
I SO hate you right now.
Good job on the cliffhanger.
| azarielthebladed chapter 2 . 4/23/2008
'I hope it's not from the training room'?
'It showed the Titans East Common room'?
Just who hasn't she been with?
| azarielthebladed chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
It doesn't matter if they WERE friend or foe, 'cuz now, in BB's mind, they're definately filed under 'FOE' ... with the angry Mark of DOOM upon their scratched-out faces.
Happy guy, that Gar.
| ZadZap chapter 2 . 3/15/2008
| aqua123 chapter 6 . 3/9/2008
Wow. That's all I can say about this fic. [thats a good thing by the way...] Also, I like the fact that you have like cliff hangers at the end of some chapters- but not the annoying ones, the type that make you cant wait to keep reading... if that makes any sense... oh well. please update as soon as you can.
| Kyuubi-Titan chapter 6 . 3/3/2008
Wow! THis fic is what ide call bitter sweet. And yet from what I know about the Titans( and its quite a bit)this falls fully into the realm of possibility. I always knew Terra was a hoe.
| Ikasury chapter 5 . 2/14/2008
short, slightly crackish in my opinion, and i think you should work on separating one thought from another a bit better, grammar-wise you're missing a lot of periods, or commas depending on what you mean, but over all i love your concept, and though short with few details, you do have some fun drama, though, it'd be nice if you separated the flashbacks from the current time a bit better, either stating when they occur/start/end and/or making them italicized helps too... grammar's the only real problem i have, i like to classify this as "delightfully deliciously devious" . hehe, i'm curious about more...
till next *salute-waves* Sayounara!
| XX.xXx.AchillezWiplash.xXx.XX chapter 5 . 2/3/2008
o I'm excited for the next chapter D
| purple-phoenix93 chapter 4 . 1/28/2008
make it red x, rae and bb is so much better than bb and terra eww terra
| Handerra chapter 4 . 1/27/2008
| beautifulpurpleflame chapter 4 . 1/27/2008
Red X! I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Teen Tyrant chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
Although I am a through and through BB/Rae shipper, don't you think you're being just a tad mean to Terra's character?
| purple-phoenix93 chapter 3 . 1/26/2008
really awsome story!