Reviews for dirty secrets
beautifulpurpleflame chapter 3 . 1/26/2008
Ooh, and the plot thickens! Can't wait to see what happens next! And thanks for the mention. _

MondoTR chapter 2 . 1/24/2008
Preferably Gar or possibly Joey (Jericho's real name) but please not X. Just remember that if you choose Dick it could affect the rest of the story more than the other choices (except maybe Gar).
Hairul The Nightrage Beast chapter 2 . 1/24/2008
Red X
Handerra chapter 2 . 1/23/2008
Red X should be the father
Omeganian chapter 2 . 1/22/2008
Despite Terra's adultery, it's unlikely she had the most sex with anyone but her husband. Let Gar be the father.
beautifulpurpleflame chapter 2 . 1/22/2008
I think I'd like to see Red X as the daddy. _

vigilantegoldfish chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
I agree with the first reviewer; a little rushed but definite potential. Just let it flow. Also, a little nit picky suggestion: when they wake up and Raven says "I fed Beast Boy", I think it would be a little clearer to spelled it "effed" if you want to avoid swearing still. I had to stare at that for a few seconds thinking "What the hell did she feed him... oh". Maybe I am just an idiot, but there's got to be some other morons out there like me, right?

But good idea, I think you could make a really good story out of this.
XX.xXx.AchillezWiplash.xXx.XX chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
This story could go pretty damn far but there are just a few things that you should consider fixing. First off, everything that you mentioned in your summary has already taken place in the first chapter. You kinda rushed it and a reader can't enjoy a story when it's rushed. Slow it down and add a bit more to it, then it should get your readers more interested into your writing.
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