|Reviews for Move Along|
| ATimeForWolves chapter 4 . 1/28/2008
Could she really be pregnant? *gasp*
Keep up the AMAZING work! And please update soon!
| Ann Y. Mous chapter 4 . 1/28/2008
Such a great story! Love this chapter and Logan's take on Rory being pregnant! Hope that she is and that he continues to be so supportive! I love them together and hope that you continue on with this amazing story! Can't wait to read more!
| Tara chapter 4 . 1/28/2008
I just wanted to say when I first read your story I absolutely loved it, and was so disappointed when you didn't update. Thank you so much for updating, and I can't wait for more. Keep up the great work. :)
| Curley-Q chapter 4 . 1/28/2008
OMG GREAT CHAPTER! PLEASE LET RORY ACTUALLY BE PREGNANT!
| smartprettyawkward chapter 4 . 1/28/2008
Somehow I've been missing this story, but I caught it now & really like it. I hope that Rory's not pregnant & that it's something else. But I do hope that you update soon! :)
| thebuzz1919 chapter 4 . 1/28/2008
Rory is so pregnant.
I know Rory is pregnant.
I hope Rory is pregnant.
Rory is pregnant, right?
Anywho, really great chapter.
I love that Rory is forgiving Logan.
| debjam chapter 4 . 1/28/2008
i loved this story when you first posted it and was thrilled to see you continue it-and i really liked the edits you made to the first three chapters. but there seems to be a continuity issue here. one-how is she pregnant? does this mean it is from the first time they slept together in the garden? but she first fell asleep at the reading of the will, which i think (according to the story) was same week as the funeral. don't think its realistic to think she is showing symptoms just yet. while i like the pregnancy twist among their issues, i think you started it a little too soon. two-it feels too easy with her just slipping back into his life given all the hesitation from the beginning. it would have been nice to see a 'talk it out-work it out' chapter with them really talking about Rory's passive agressive issues before the pregnancy hinting. instead you chose to kind of gloss over them and have them move forward in this chapter.
and i know you've taken a lot of heat for the focus on lorelai, but to not address it at all does a disservice to the story. we didn't get any kind of resolution to her and luke and its now been a few weeks (in the story) and we don't know if she's been to the doctor, her and emily...nothing. i think you started it as a rory and lorelai story and i think you should continue as such. just my two cents.
sorry to be so critical, i just think you had a good story going and i would hate to see you lose focus. looking forward to an update!
| halfadash chapter 4 . 1/28/2008
very good chapter, i normally don't like it when rory gets pregnant, but i think the way you're introducing it is really unique, i think you'll handle it well.
just something you probably didn't realize, you have a bit of a continuation mistake. in the last chapter, you said that rory and logan got back to their apartment after the funeral, rory took a shower, and they fell asleep, only to wake up in the middle of the night and have sex. in this chapter, you say that they could hardly make it through the apartment door before sleeping together. unless i missed something, this is supposed to be the same night, both reference the breakfast with elias the next morning.
| Katha chapter 4 . 1/28/2008
I liked the old version and I'm very curious how the new version is going to be like. I liked how Logan again and again brought the possible pregnancy up and teased her. I'm not sure about the pregnancy if it's good or not and so I'll wait till we know for sure.
| ange87 chapter 4 . 1/28/2008
i love your fic, moreover there are long chapter; i like the story!
| Khyara chapter 4 . 1/28/2008
Great chapter, excellent way to start the week :)
| cathyrock chapter 4 . 1/28/2008
she really is pregnant, isn't she? OMG, Or maybe it's a false alert, at least she is considering going to London with him and Elias, I hate him. Loved the chapter though, it was long and brilliant. The "mood swings", if that's what they are, were really funny too.
| lexhuntzberger chapter 4 . 1/28/2008
I was thinking about what I was going to review throughout the story and when I read Logan thinking about her being pregnant... all review thoughts flew from my head. So I blame you on being such an intriguing author that my review isn't as good as it would have been. :p
Is she really pregnant? Of course you won't tell me, but I can tell you what I think right? I don't think she is. I think there is something else wrong that you aren't going to elude to until it actually happens. So you will have us thinking she is pregnant and bam! you hit us with something else. Not that I mind :] I love your story, so keep on and don't tell me anything... I like the surprises :]
p.s. I love Katie ;] You are my new favorite person Katie :]
| Poshy chapter 4 . 1/28/2008
she is pregnant isn't she?
that would be kinda cool D
great chapter, as always! ;)
| Skylove chapter 4 . 1/28/2008
thanks for the update, I love your story!
Can't wait for more...