|Reviews for Alice's Sorrow|
| f00f00 chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
I like it. :)
| Alexawynters chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
this is prob a one shot but i hope its not. i would LOVE to read more. poor alice lol. good story. more please?
| xoxcrescentmoonxox chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
Well, that's kind of a gross but intriguing pairing, but you wrote it really well, and I ended up enjoying this oneshot. I really liked teh last sentence: Because if Bella wasn’t mine, her wedding at least would be. It gave a powerful ending to the piece, and it was canon to the book ]
| kattastrophical chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
OH PLEASE UPDATE THIS - ITS PROBS HARD TO BUT I LOVELOVELOVE THE ALICE/BELLA AND THERE S NOT MANY AXB STORIES SO PLZ CONTINUE!
| ohhhitslovex3 chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
kinda gross thinking about alice and bella...
| Nicky Morello chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
I'm not asking you toupdate, I'm BEGGING YOU!
| Escaped chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
It wasn't bad, but you're forgetting that both Edward and Jasper's abilities allow them to sense Alice's feelings.
| xxDeath's Daughterxx chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
you know you should continue this and extend the one shot to longer. i don't want to take your work, but if you don't i would for you! i loved it, seriously consider extending. if you don't i understand. keep writing. peace _ ,..,
| emily chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
I loved it! This whole Alice being gay thing, is really cool not to mention original!
| selinnium chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
Alice was bi in this story?
... I never thought about it... just like I never thought the possibility of Dumbledore gay...
aw... poor Alice :(
| full.speed.adrift chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
That was really creepy. Lesbian Alice is sick. Don't continue. This is a flame.
| spanootie chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
Wow, I never saw that coming.