Reviews for Viscious Circle
CKLizzy chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
That's a cruel one.

Don't wish you anything bad, but if a bad mood has this effect on your writing, well...

I mean, compared to the lenght of your story this one-shot tells so much; it's a novel of some kind, of so many nights that are so different.

As is your story, never read anything like this; that Sarah and Jareth are in love with each other, he is coming to her whenever it is possible, and that they both are depressed because they can't be together all the time.

Very well written, there's nothing to be not sure of! :)
notwritten chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
I have to say this was a good chapter. Keep smiling and writing.:-) chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
I love it. One shot things are great. The details were magnificent as well- really good mental images. awesome job.

yodeladyhoo chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
The angst is fine. Personally, I think you could benefit from using a thesaurus.

Thank you for sharing.
hazlgrnLizzy chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
this was excellent, you cetainly can write angst!

It just seems sad to end the story here, but I really do enjoy the story!