Reviews for You won't lose me
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2015
I wish she didnt die
Inkfire chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
I liked this...

...wow...

...I'm done with your fics.

Can you believe this?

(HUGS)
JamesLuver chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
Beautifully written. You paint a picture of the Toby/Lovett mother-son relationship very well. I love how you wrote the inner struggle that Mrs. Lovett was facing at the end, and I also liked how Toby is still his innocent, trusting self when it comes to Mrs. Lovett, even though he doesn’t believe her about the purse; you’re characterisation of him is perfect.

The end gave me chills. Indeed we do know how it all ended. :( Anyway, I digress. Awesome job. ;)
Tiffany chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
GREAT STORY!
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Really good story. I always loved the mother-son relationship between Mrs. Lovett and Toby. He really does care for her and she him, despite their differing opinions on Mr. Todd. I like the alternative approach you took to this and how you have Toby realize she's lying by knowing that Mr. Todd lacks affection for her and sort of warns her of his ways. Very nice work with the dialogue. I also like the struggle you give Mrs. Lovett in the end and yet you still have her choose loyalty to Todd. Great work.
CrypticCalico chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Oh, poor Toby... I always felt so sorry for him when Mrs. Lovett did that to him, even though she felt so bad about it. I lolled at this line: “Mr. Todd wouldn’t give you a purse, he wouldn’t remember your birthday even if you had told him twenty times, he just doesn’t…” Too true, haha.

-C.C. :)
x Lost Hero x chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
aw, so sweet. toby really cares about her.
slytherin360 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
:'( great story. poor
Mrs.DeppQueenObsessorGoddess chapter 1 . 1/23/2008
Yay! Another great story, great job!
niki-chan2 chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
I really enjoyed this story. I just wrote a story about this concept myself, Toby trying to warn Mrs. Lovett. It's interesting to read another perspective on it. I really liked the line "he wouldn’t remember your birthday even if you had told him twenty times". Great job!
Gothic Godess chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
OMG! WOW! At complete lose for words...

You are AMAZING! I LOVE this story so incredibly much. It's beautiful. The ending many me shiver, alot. But this is everything I asked for. I love your writing style. Your descriptions of Toby were so cute! Oh and I also love the way you painted the relationship between Miss Lovette and Toby. And the way you had Miss Lovette keep staring off into space thinking about Sweeney Todd, THAT WAS BRILLANT.

All in all this story is my all time favorite Sweeney Todd story!