Reviews for Twenty Times Uzumaki Naruto Didn't Die
Le Poussin Fou chapter 1 . 3/15
It's very sad :(
Squid the God chapter 1 . 3/1
Jesus man why you gotta do naruto like this ?
Scarlet Azalea chapter 1 . 2/19
You did a Tolkien/LOTR homage. :) I felt it was fairly obvious. Probably the only time I smiled while reading this (it was dark from the start, but you knew that).
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17
Pls write more stories i have never read anything like this u are impossible
MEL chapter 1 . 1/23
wow ...
authornada chapter 1 . 1/14
this is good, when he pranked his son it was great; I just hope that he never found out about his Dads' clones.
Darkneostar1 chapter 1 . 1/7
I think that this story would help portray immortality perfectly. This was an awesome read. Thanks for the amazing story.
DemonKingSamael chapter 1 . 1/5
Wow.

There are still chills running down my neck and arms as I write. This was an incredible read. Thank you for writing it.
NatNicole chapter 1 . 12/27/2016
Terrifying & amazing...
ziyadahrs chapter 1 . 12/25/2016
Exceptional
Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2016
WHAT the fuck is this man
you dont write a story like this i will give a heart attcke to somone
Jj chapter 1 . 11/14/2016
Dammmm that was deep/dark can you make a sequal like about how they watch him from heaven or where ever the go pls
Sefera chapter 1 . 10/25/2016
This Naruto needs to be given a fresh start in a new universe where the same laws of nature don't apply. That would be interesting. Great story though.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2016
Wow the ending
rayningnight chapter 1 . 9/28/2016
I feel exhausted for Naruto. Tired and heartbroken and - *sigh*

I guess you can never be more than human - only less. Immortality - hah, I'd love to see if this!Naruto have a lengthy conversation with Orochimaru through time travel or something. Does Naruto even care anymore though? He's not really living. Just surviving to the next day. And what ever happened to Kurama? Or - wait, he was never mentioned, so I assume he wasn't introduced in canon yet (or hadn't shown his emotional/empathetic side?) when you made this story...

Whatever happened to Kakashi, anyway? Sasuke got killed, Sakura... killed herself(?) (with Hiashi?) but Kakashi never seemed to show up which I found kinda really strange? And whatever happened to Iruka?

Oh well, great story, loved and hated it, and it brought much... emotion. And a weight on my heart. ...Poor Naruto. Damn the Fourth for doing that to his own son...

Hoping for more,
Rayne
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