Reviews for Goodbye, my almost lover
svgurl410 chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
I was so relieved when I realized that the girl's POV wasn't Lily. Then again, I should've known ... James wouldn't treat his Lily like that! ;)

I felt bad for the other girl but I was rooting on James/Lily as always.

It's always interesting to see a third person's POV on a ship and you did well with it!

Wonderful job! :D
lilyandjamesisforever chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
Whoa! I thought LILY was the narrator for a few paragraphs! I had to go back and re-read. But I loved the ending. I love Lily/James fluff, and the thought that Lily was in Ravenclaw, even though we know she wasn't. I just don't like the idea of James sleeping around a lot.
Entchanted chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
That was good. I love the idea; you did an awesome job.
Polyethene Pam chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
I really liked this. Great job!
serenity12345 chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
aww, I feel bad for her!
Owl Emporium chapter 1 . 2/12/2008
That was so good! I loved it, it was really nice to see someone else's POV. Great job! :]

Angelica
ANGELiCAWROTE chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
this is a sad fic but i totally love a fine frenzy.. it's sad.. this type of fics always get to m.. so sad.. how pathetic my life is. for some sad reason i could see myself being that girl that the guy doesnt care about.. sad thought indeed
M. Pond chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
I really liked that. Took me a bit to click that it wasn't Lily's P.O.V, but I thought it was excellent. Nice to see the 'other' girl's thoughts on losing James.