Reviews for Lost Soul
von chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
i really enjoyed it good character representation leave you wanting to read more
prosandconsofdisaster chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
i enjoyed this :)
SuperN-Gaspard chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
This is a good read though I only read it for a better understanding of "Finding Closure".

You might wanna fix this line from that to then. It's at the bottom of the story.

“Oh, more that that,” the kid interrupted.

beatingheartbaby chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
I love this story. I'm constantly rereading it. I'm really hoping you'll do a follow-up or another NCIS/SG-1 crossover. Particularly with Mini Jack. Awesome writing! Once again, love it!
KellethMetheus chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
Loved this. I have an NCIS story hanging around that I need to finish one day. It was very good but where was McGee? He's my favorite.

Misty-J chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Very nice story. I would love to see more. :)

You did a great job getting the characters.
Kamikashi chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
I've read this one so often and I still think it's fantastic.

I would really love to see the sequels to this and to "Second to None".

By the way, there is a new crossover system which would make the cross clearer.
rycol53 chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
i have only one word for you, sequel

really good work, really sad that danny sam and teal'c couldn't make an appearance, that's why you need a sequel.
Vampyre Moon chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
this was good. really good. i don't understand the sand comment but the rest was good.
Richard6154 chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
Very well done story and characters. Thanks for sharing.
sapphtastic chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
I abolutely LOVED this. Impeccably written - always a plus. I'm not much for NCIS, so I can't comment on the characterization there, but I thought your Jack was fantastic. I loved this outsider viewpoint of him. Also, kudos for making him capable and such with the computers. Nice touch. Thanks for the read. I'm on my way to check out the rest of your stuff now!
Marci Daugherty chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
This is a great crossover. I think you nailed the characters of both Jethro and Jack. I'd love to see a possible followup or additional encounter, maybe with Jethro trying to recruit Jon to work for NCIS? I'd love to see your take on Jon interacting with Tony or Abby. I loved that you had him take out Ziva even while he was out of it!

I'm also following your more recent stuff-Keep up the wonderful work!
umino-gaara chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
I was really impressed. I love crossovers. And poor John never got enough screen time.
Bixata chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
Great story! I loved it. Thanks for sharing.
Fishy Rainboots chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
Good job. I really enjoyed it.
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