|Reviews for One More Day|
| slayer79 chapter 2 . 1/27/2010
I was delighted to have found your story!
This was such a perfect little moment for them, I think you capture Ben's thoughts perfectly.
I know it's been a few years since you wrote this but is there any chance you will be writing more Margene/Ben fics?
| AvengedSevenfoldGirl chapter 2 . 9/27/2009
i was hoping someone would write a fanfic on Ben!
| Serious Fan chapter 2 . 7/8/2008
I liked that. I know a lot of people try to work "that his step-mother route" but if you be realistic, there is no age gap between them. Not a significant one anyway. I liked the reality appeal it had. If that makes any sense.
| MoneyMatchShip chapter 2 . 6/21/2008
I always felt like there was a little bit of something inappropriate between Margene and Ben (though I always thought that it was on Ben's part). Sometimes the way that he looked at her was... well, not what they should have been. Though considering the whole premise of this show is that Margene is a third wife, inappropriate for them is a hard line to draw... Great "drabble".
| D'Laina chapter 2 . 4/16/2008
I think that was awesome, there has always been a sort of underlying sexual tension between Ben and Margene even though the show never addressed it quite like you did.
| SenaKD chapter 2 . 1/30/2008