Reviews for One Last Banana
KarenSoul chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
Hehe, I liked it.

BabelFish42 chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
Hahaha, this was too cute. "Are you afraid I'm going to leave you for a banana?" I cracked up when I read that.

And I loved this too: "Bananas trip me up. You keep me from falling."

Very cute story!
nyckiii chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
Lol- this was so cute! I loved reading it- youve got amazing writing skill and this was a funny oneshot ;) Cant wait to read more of your writing :)
twilightaddict13 chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
Haha! I loved it!
briiittx xhc chapter 1 . 7/11/2008

I loved it!

Kept me laughing the whole time!

I can't believe he was jealous of the banana!


Great story!
DreamaDove93 chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
Lol, nice way to realieve the tension from the funeral and a fathers love
KinseyEldridge chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
Lol, nice!XD 8favs* I thought it was going to end up being some kind of sex joke or something.

And would you mind me putting a fanfic on my site? It's about Twilight and I'm searching for some fics to put up.
Race for the clock tower chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
hahah loved it. classic banana peel slip. i love the little jokes in it

-Race for the clock tower
CassiexLynn chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
I had no idea that writing about Bella and a banana could ever sound realistic, but you certainly got it PERFECTLY. Brilliant idea, this was very enjoyable to read. I especially loved the ending, with Charlie.
LunaPuff chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
aw, now i want a banana! that sounds so good... but i'll suffice with my lemonade. it's not the same, but it's fruit. haha i loved this one-shot. bravo on making me almost TASTE the banana. yum...
Random Little Remus Lover chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
simply cute!

janya.wrote.nightrose chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
"You know, you don't have to give up fruit. There's another choice."

nia-ox chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
“Are you afraid that I’m going to leave you for a banana?" - I was doubled up!

As always, very well done. :)
mindmundane chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
*tear tear tear* who knew a banana could be oh so sad! o sigh. great job!
movieandbookgirl chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
LOL! That seriously was funny with Charlie slipping on the same banana peel.
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