Reviews for One Last Banana
Edward-is-hunky chapter 1 . 5/17/2008

"Bananas trip me up. You keep me from falling."

i love that line
Gramatical editor chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
Good oneshot. In the last paragraph, the first sentance, i dont think there should be a comma... just saying its bugging me a bit. Sounds like a comma splice.
Niamh929 chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
HA HA HA great

I laughed out loud and my dog who is sleeping with my boyfriend on my bed both woke up ...

Love it :)

- B
musically inclined chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
Haha. That was cute.

Musically Inclined
diana chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
hahaha this brightened my evening! thanks!
R0ckl0bster chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
I liked this. made me chuckle.
ChieriAn9eL chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
That was very cute and yes... realistic too.
nothingleft chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
Also very funny, but I did like the spider more. But I loved how you described her eating the banana. ;P
1152178291268291 chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
Wow. I think this is the only one where Bella's not in love with someTHING other than Edward, well except for the on where Edward is half banana (Ed-nana). That doesn't really count though.
liarlikeme chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
i love this. "Bananas trip me up. You keep me from falling" genius. simply.
SisterGrimmErin chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
very good! i enjoyed this one, very well done! see, it's even making me rhyme...
Hermione W. Cullen chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
love it.
a little erratic chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
cute, cute, cute. very cute. very in character for edward, especially.
thecolouryes chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
this was really, really good - very believable! but for some reason, the last paragraph made me loose all of the sanity that i had gained after reading it. odd... ;)

whatever,i really liked it. the last paragraph was really funny.
michaeladawn chapter 1 . 1/23/2008
hahaha that was really funny

i didn't notice any errors but then again I wasn't really looking for them . . .

eddies getting dumped for a banana
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