Reviews for Kuro Arashi: The Black Storm
Partsu chapter 24 . 2/28/2014
Yuuna is my favorite character in this series. Screw the "heroes" that girl is bigger hero than all of them combined!
NLV chapter 24 . 1/19/2014
I have heard the spirits whisper of the return of this story I've sat here waiting for almost two years and now you have returned to this world. It is an honor to welcome you back revered one.
Guest chapter 19 . 8/8/2012
The cake is a lie!
Krabkrab chapter 18 . 5/26/2012
To be fair, I doubt Setsuna was expecting it (she's there for kendo and perhaps Shinmeiryu even if that's meant to be a secret from mundanes) otherwise she probably wouldn't have had such a hard time.
GlaringEyes chapter 23 . 1/31/2011
The first ten chapters were quite interesting, since they focused on Love Hina's background. I liked the 15 and 16th chapters too, since they were the ties to Negima's background.

But I have some remarks, especially at the latest chapters:

1) Too many OC's. It kills the story's focus and makes it hard to understand it. I think Seno, Gensai and Namusan would be just enough.

2) Too many movies/mangas references. While it is nice to see some references to other works, too much of a thing kills the story's originality and makes it incomprehensible to non-experts.

3) Too many action scenes. I like them, but four whole action-only chapters is quite tiresome to read.

Anyway your fanfic is really interesting, to the point it made me want to read to the very end.
DamionCross chapter 12 . 7/29/2010
The guards guarding Lambda Lu's room just happen to look like Rude and Reno. Coincidence?
Tikigod784 chapter 23 . 2/13/2010
Chao's scene was satisfying. All this

talk of Halo being real and no one quite

understands how #%ed up it is that it's

merely been turned into a video game. I

imagine if the Kuro or Ala Alba knew

they'd be less inclined to fight though. Heck, Takamichi's scene made that clear enough.

Itsuki had a Hellsing moment there. Yaey.

Ah... that was my favorite part of


Okay, there needs to be a new story made

as soon as possible detailing Seno's

backstory, because no offense, but all

this stuff is coming out of nowhere.

The Zeroes seemed to me to be the most

likely actual casualties as Mahorafest...

Yay Regan x Yuuna FTW! My favorite pairing in Kuro right there.

Takaki's like a mix between Simon and Haruhi... geh?

Chao's a member of the UNSC fighting the Covenant. She's so much more prepared to kick ass than any of Negi's partners (minus perhaps Kaede). Kinda makes me wonder how the hell Negi could beat her in this situation. Certainly not by himself. It doesn't add up, even with Casseipoia. Chao would be willing to die for her goals, so I don't see her just giving up like in canon Negima. There's gotta be something else. Perhaps intervention via Mutsumi...

Heartless Droids make me cackle in glee... this "war" is great. I can't decide who to root for. Excellent.

Yuuna's such a friggin' badass... why isn't she a "hero"... unless she's going to have her own story I suppose. Still, she deserves more than just a support role.

300 references... so fitting... gah...

Kinda surprised suicide bombers didn't show up...sooner. Heck, active camouflage drones set up like that right at the beginning would've made the most sense to me...

So I'm guessing Mahora's gonna take back the offensive next time. Woot. Excellent chapter. Truly epic. I am completely confused as to why this story doesn't have many reviews... maybe because Love Hina comes first in the genre category... dooming it to obscurity. Kinda.
Tikigod784 chapter 22 . 6/24/2009
God, this is like reading one of the epic Halo fics that explains strategy, except we have walkers and magical girls philandering about. Too awesome for words. frasqdrdasfadsfdrk. Exactly. Halo 3 ODST/Recon seems like a very convenient point in the Halo story to put your Kuro storyline, no? Also, are you pumped for what Halo:REACH could be? I am. Battlefield-style halo game ftw!
DamionCross chapter 22 . 6/22/2009
Another good chapter, Arashi. As of right now, I'm amazed by the story to come up with the answers, but I'll re-read the chapter and give my best educated guesses.
Tikigod784 chapter 21 . 3/22/2009
Ah, I love all these Halo references. The authentic-military stuff is a nice add-in too. And of course, there's Setsuna coming in like the bad-ass she is. Not to mention all these crazy OCs. Unfortunately, the profile section on your site doesn't work, so I have trouble differentiating some, but the Simon-Kamina pair are easy enough. Nice work all around! Besides Mana, Chachamaru, and Hakase, though, I have to wonder who else Chao intends to serve as "VILLAIN" units...
Nysk chapter 7 . 3/10/2009
I must applaud you for this tale. Well written and done.

I also applaud you for having continued it despite the lack of reviews in the past.

Thank you for your dedication.
Tikigod784 chapter 19 . 2/4/2009
Holy crap, long, but quite EPIC. So many OCs...or are they cameo appearances? I can't really tell... got any pics?
Sailor Enlil chapter 19 . 2/1/2009
Whoa! About time this fanfic was updated. Sure is getting to epic proportions now. Keep up the good work!
Tikigod784 chapter 18 . 5/9/2008
As interesting as it sounds, I don't see the need to keep Mahorafest completely canon... after all, this is love hina centered-ish, so can't you just focus on them (and KonoSetsu) and add in other negima characters as they're needed? Ah, well... regardless, crazy chapter. I'm looking forward to the unfolding of this epic tale...
kidcrud chapter 18 . 5/9/2008
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