Reviews for Ravyn Parker or Harry Potter?
WhiteElfElder chapter 30 . 4/12/2013
For all the ability that Harry showed fighting with Quirrelmort, I am surprised he wasn't magiced into a coma. Not a bad idea, but I half expected Fawkes to show up and do something about what Hat warned on.
Draeconin chapter 17 . 10/26/2011
-I duh no.-

I ignored this the first time I saw it, but: 'Dunno' - a contraction of "do not know". However, 'dunno' is VERY informal English. Is Ravyn that lowbrow? (Think UK, not USA.)
Draeconin chapter 12 . 10/26/2011
-IQ - 164 and I hate math...-

IQ - 132, and higher maths escapes me. On the other hand, I'm quite creative. A high IQ doesn't necessarily mean you're good at everything. :)
Draeconin chapter 11 . 10/26/2011
-a gift certificate of ten galleons-

Fifty UK pounds, or eighty US dollars. She must be a VERY good friend!
hpfan1982 chapter 11 . 1/22/2011
So things are becoming clearer. That's good cus I was confused lol. Thanks for sharing, great job so far.
Jim Red Hawk chapter 26 . 1/22/2011
""That is disturbing. Do you know what type…" she asked before Severus Snape saw them through the window where he was brewing his potions. The windows were in the courtyard and were elegant arches with old, slightly warped, glass.

He came outside. "Ms. Chan, Mr. Parker."

"Professor."

"Mr. Snape."

Severus looked between them, "We have rules for a reason. I will not take points from Gryffindor - but I will have to assign detention."

Ravyn and Xi Wu nodded as the woman left the two of them to their thoughts. "I'll do a bit more research. Hopefully I will be able to help you."

Ravyn nodded, smiling. "Thanks Xi Wu." he said before Snape grabbed his upper arm and all but dragged him up to Gryffindor Tower.

"You will receive the owl soon. Do not count on Professor McGonagall to be able to get you out of it."

Ravyn nodded, "Yes sir, I am sorry Sir.""

WHY was Ravyn given a detention?

JimS
Jim Red Hawk chapter 24 . 1/22/2011
"He dove.

Later, people would equate Quirrell's scream with that of a Banshee, Severus would be using it as his Patronus Memory for the next year and a half and Ravyn would remember the look of terror coming across the possessed man's face."

You should be ashamed! I was laughing so hard I almost dropped my laptop off my lap onto da floor! :o

ROFL! :)

JimS
xread chapter 30 . 1/14/2011
very good story, i particularly liked the descriptions of magic.

You really don't need to be so humble in your author notes, you are a good author.

i support your idea not to retell every single year at hogwarts, but to select to most important parts and do flashback.
loretta537 chapter 30 . 1/4/2011
this was a good story, let us know when you post the sequel
landershyahoo.com chapter 18 . 1/3/2011
Still like the story.

Don't know enough grammar/editing stuff to give a critique on that.

Just like a good story with some plot that is NOT identical to cannon [If people want that they should just re-read the damn books]

Like your chapter that included some humor.

Totally agree with your sentiments: "If you don't like a story; don't read it! It's not like there aren't a gazillion other stories out there.

DON'T get bored. Keep writing

THANKS again.
landershyahoo.com chapter 13 . 1/3/2011
Great story. Hope you hold off on the reveal for a bunch of chapters OR the sequel.

Like the seer/magic seer angle.

Keep it going.

It would be good to see Riley/Sirius in a relationship [that will last] with Xi

THANK YOU for a good story
Vellouette chapter 30 . 1/3/2011
I'd like to see Ravyn befriend Luna in her first year.
mitremlap chapter 28 . 12/10/2010
great chapter, thank you
loretta537 chapter 26 . 10/19/2010
thank you for the update, i cant wait to see how they get rid of the dragon
timber chapter 25 . 10/13/2010
you beg. so shall you get.

over two years. 25 chapters. barely into first year.

pathetic. give it up mate.

you ain't never gonna finish.

you did ask.
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