Reviews for You Can't Always Get What You Want
tambrathegreat chapter 3 . 1/25/2008
I do like reading stories about young Snape. The only problem I can see, which is why you're not recieving the reviews, is that you have not put the disclaimer AU (Alternate Universe) in your plot summary. I don't know if you've read Deathly Hallows yet, so I don't want to give anything away, but this story is definately AU. Also, I don't know how you're uploading the story, but your spells need to be in italics. If you don't know how to do that, PM me and I will walk you through it. Good first effort. I look forward to more.
tambrathegreat chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
Solid chapter. I liked the bit between Severus and the girl when he helped her.
tambrathegreat chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
Fun start. I'm sorry you haven't gotten any reviews yet. Its like that with your first story. I'm off to read the next chapter.
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